As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
With Everyday technology proliferation all over the world, the life of people have become easy and effortless.
In retrospect, a century ago it would be inconceivable for the people the kind of life we are enjoying with
the evolution of technologies, I mean the way our quotidian journey of chores starts with advanced machines to prepare food then to the work on high end vehicles in couple of minutes abreast of enjoying the entertainment sources on a swipe of fingers who would have thought this?
Certainly Such a reliance over the technology is making us lethargic and ruining us physically.However, A perpetual contention keeps on arriving whether it is crippling our thinking ability too. Well it would be wrong
to generalize the argument and reaching to conclusion just with an example that if a child is using calculator or Internet during study, it inhibits
his intellectual ability.
Just to paraphrase a maxim “Necessity is the mother of invention”, the way the evolution of technology is never ending the growth in intellectual ability and creativity of
People would be never ending. Since creativity is always referred "Use it or lose It”. However, recent scientific research shows that overuse of technology
is enhancing the intellectual score but degrading the overall creative score among the youngsters. This is probably because they basically spend leisure’s and
boredom over cellphones and video games.Hence, there is a great need to utilize that time to hone our creative skills with the help of technologies itself.
A very common example shows how technology has ameliorated Intellectual Intelligence of human beings. A decade ago smart phones and such high end computers
were not in existence. The people intellectual scope was delimited to old cell phones which were used only for talking purpose ,Now with such high end smartphones people
are able to experience more technology hence more intellectual augmentation.
Thus, In nutshell technology boost would not be affecting our mental strength if we are using it in a balanced way for information enhancement and
Ingenuity along with a source to fulfill our needs, without letting it to make us slave of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, well, i mean, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34844192635 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18617679802 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57507082153 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.1709066133 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4166666667 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.97078651685 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146872296219 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518523411424 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469581075384 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522254773922 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424821132095 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 14.1392134831 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.