As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
many would contend that the ability of humans to think for themselves will decline because people are contigent on technology to solve probelm. In some sense, it is ture which surfeit relying on technology instead of self-thinking is problematic. Yet, I still believe that advanced technology provides us with more chance to deliberate with profoundity. I would like to say the good stance of advance technology which is benefift us in daily lives.
Of course, few would defintely gainsay that people should not be engaged in the usage of technologies such as cell phone and laptops. Also, it is not a uncommon situation to see absymal incidents game addicted people confuse virtual lives with reality, and become indicted. Or, social networing platforms such as Instagram and Facebook offer contents only based on people's interest; it leads people to have provisional insights and consider a whole world agrees upon him or her. this limpes that deteriortation of think can be critical, and we should become retlcuant to depend on technologies.
Notwithstanding severe side effects of technologies, it does not necessarily mean that the progressed technologies is irrefutable. In terms of good aspects of technologies, benefits we obtain is superior than negative impacts that we are going to experience. For example, let's assume that we describe a guy's daily routine. he wakes up from alarm which he set the night before he went to bed. then, he drinks a cup of coffee from a coffee machine or drink a fresh milk that is placed in the referigerator. After morning routine, he drives all the way to his vocation and uses computer incessantly until he comes back to home with his car again. he spends d a couple hours of watching TV or movies; then, he finallys goes to bed as usual. Although this daily routine does not strictly coherent with all people, we recognize how much we gain benefits from the technologies. this incredible technologeis allow us to handle tasks facile, as well as to broaden the scope of lives. we need to acknowldge that we are a great beneficiary of technology.
In addition, the problem of treating all the technologies as henious objects can be disscussed in another sense. technologies paradioxcially provide us with the ability to think deeper or the skills to act promplty and effciently. people are able to calcuate complicated math problems because simple and tedious math can be done using calculus. Or, in medcial technology field, many of instruments to evaulate patient's result become highly automated with precise accuracy. In such cases, patients can be cured faster with effeicent treatments.
To sum, despite the possibility of deterioration of self-thinking, we are still relying on technologies greatly and we gain more benefits than its deletrious effects. With regard to concern about the side effects, we can try to restrain harmful subjects through the regulation of laws or finidng the new technologies that can preclude any incidents. Taken all together, we should not be negeligence to convince that technologies are harmful, and we need to take a consideration about benefits we receive everyday.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, still, then, well, as to, for example, in addition, of course, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2648.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15175097276 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00729379257 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562256809339 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 834.3 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1106795819 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65384615385 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184271581129 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508562676207 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566305875725 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114442373781 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819684521532 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 100.480337079 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.