As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

We live in an era where right from waking up in the morning to going back to sleep at night we use different forms of technology. Starting from the treading mill that we use for exercising, the coffee machine for making the hot beverage to listening to music while taking shower, presence of technology is implicit. The high end computers that we use to do almost every little work from drafting mail to giving command for the launch of rocket is all because of technology. We are using technology like never before for solving our problems and this has created a dependency which in a way is inexorable. Technology and our reliance on it has both good and bad effects but saying that this dependency will ultimately lead to deterioration of humans ability to think for himself is a statement I would like to disagree.
Technology does give us all the comforts at an arm’s length, but it is making us lazy and less active physically. Because of the easy availability of solutions to problem through technology, we are getting more and more reluctant to use our own intelligence. Our morals have changed and our interpersonal relations are getting effected given the excess time we spent on the tools of technology like phone, computer etc.
However, the human imagination has not taken a back seat. Technological advancement have made it possible for humans to take their time off mundane problems of day to day life and put more effort into solving higher truths of nature. For example, in early centuries, mathematicians used to spend their life time trying to calculate the exact value of the number pi. But now with the event of super computers we can calculate the value of pi with a million digits after the decimal point in just under a second. In medical sciences, technology has helped humans to decode genes to know why we are the way we are. The world is a safer place now that technology has made it possible to develop vaccines for almost every deadly disease. For example, the World Health Organisation (WHO) has declared small pox to be an extinct disease. Not just the old problems, humans are solving the new problems that technology poses before them by using technology itself, which is a clear example of human ingenuity.
Technology has helped humans to come a long way from the need of just food, shelter and cloth to build massive structures like large hadron collider (LHC) to detect particles that could let us know the origin of this universe. And with the help of technology humans will continue to grow and prosper.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...mplicit. The high end computers that we use to do almost every little work from dra...
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
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...ies, mathematicians used to spend their life time trying to calculate the exact value of ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'for example']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253668763103 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.174004192872 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0859538784067 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335429769392 0.0497285424764 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0587002096436 0.0444667217837 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127882599581 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0607966457023 0.0406280797675 150% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65625890869 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0482180293501 0.030933414821 156% => OK
Particles: 0.0020964360587 0.0016655270985 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.0901467505241 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104821802935 0.0249443105267 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125786163522 0.0148568991511 85% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2551.0 2732.02544248 93% => OK
No of words: 442.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77149321267 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321266968326 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235294117647 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165158371041 0.200843997647 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110859728507 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65625890869 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 219.290929204 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533936651584 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 62.1279303031 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5555555556 23.380412469 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8952211791 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.722222222 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 23.380412469 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.674092028746 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 48.0849673203 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.66141732283 1.64882698954 101% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455609968872 0.391690518653 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125954455332 0.123202303941 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0745322112206 0.077325440228 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537962070205 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134681797234 0.149214159877 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191177272659 0.161403998019 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703780824458 0.0892212321368 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385412241622 0.385218514788 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.031946868148 0.0692045440612 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332261073553 0.275328986314 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421146892806 0.0653680567796 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum three arguments wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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