People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
The environment, one’s parent and peer group, school and society rules, and many other factors all contribute to a person’s disposition. Also, people’s attitudes are based on the immediate surrounding and the society. But one might say people’s attitude are largely determined by their surroundings than by the society. While some other people believe people’s attitude is based on the society and not the immediate environment. However, immediate situation contributes more to an individual’s disposition than the society at large.
An individual’s attitude is fully based on the situation such individual found himself or herself. In politics for example, most politicians parade themselves as philanthropists before gaining power. These politicians are mostly charitable and generous when they are vying for a post. This is because of the situation they found these politicians found themselves. But after being elected, some politicians seems to change. Some politicians tend to show baseness and depraved attitude. This is also as a result of the autocratic situation they found themselves.
Furthermore, apart from the politicians who are commonly known to change attitude according to the situation they found themselves, children are also mercurial when it comes to their attitude and this is mostly caused by their immediate environment or situation. In children’s case as well, the society plays little in determining their dispositions. For instance, a child who has martinet parent will seem mild and tamed when the parent is around. But as soon as the parent are out of sight, such child seem loose. Also, children tend to do bad things when they are not under an adult’s supervision. This same children, are kind and moral in the sight of their parent a highly venerated adult. From this, we could see as well people’s attitude are mainly determined by their surroundings and less affected by the society.
True, some might say that society play large role in an individual’s behaviour. For example, an orphan who have no one to take care of him or her, and decided to turn to a ruffian. Another example include a generous man who swindled by some dubious fellow while portraying his act of generosity. These examples are true to some extent. However, the orphan and the philanthropist can choose to behave in a way if they so wish. Thus, the politician and the orphan are largely influenced by the people around and them and not the entire society.
In summary, people’s attitude are less determined by the society and largely determined by the people’s surrounding. Several examples include children and politicians. Thus, society play little role in a one’s attitude while the environment or the situation an individual found himself or herself largely determine an individual’s disposition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'includes'.
Suggestion: includes
...d to turn to a ruffian. Another example include a generous man who swindled by some dub...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34966592428 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03458960712 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463251670379 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.0 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8651107726 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7857142857 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0357142857 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355974303845 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969923561174 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12091394766 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21754245002 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167677635755 0.0667264976115 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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