People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Attitude plays a major role in defining a person, his/her character, behaviour etc. It also foresees, in which direction the person would go in future. As there is one famous quote “Attitude is Everything”, perfectly fits in this issue. In my opinion, I mostly agree that people’s attitude is almost true in immediate or sudden situation than the society for three reasons.
To begin with, many people show different attitude when there are many people surrounding them compared to situation when they are alone or with closet people. For example, there is my friend with always criticizes other classmates when we both are alone or when we talk in phones; but when they are more people, he just behaves as if he is their friend. Moreover, when we both are safe, he behaves as if he is strong or something, but when any panic situation comes, like if I met with an accident, then he would just be scared even though it’s a minor accident.
Secondly, people show different attitude when they plan something new or interesting thing to do, but when they start doing it, they change their attitude towards it. For example, if a student plans to study for eight hours to study or study something which is not related to his/her domain or career like for example, stock market. When they were planning, they are confident, determined etc. but whenever any problem comes, 90% of people lose their interest and just give-up.
Finally, people behave differently in front of different people. Some of them show positive attitude towards some people and negative towards some other people and vice-versa. For example, some politicians give huge speeches about this much amount investment or this huge building construction, when ever there is an election and need to seek the votes. Once their election is over, all those statements stated are proved wrong. It shows how much they care about their country or people as general. Further, it applies even in government offices, the people show favouritism towards some other people, like people who bribe them, their work would be completed fast, compared to those who are sincere.
In conclusion, it is true that there are people who show similar attitude to the immediate situations as well as when they are in group. But that category of people is very rare to find as well as that kind of people are very much taciturn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... in which direction the person would go in future. As there is one famous quote “Attitude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, as well as that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92555831266 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4962951817 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501240694789 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.160131391 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.473684211 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15789473684 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200106712044 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664795988862 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464968889085 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117769937384 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315787078989 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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