People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
I mostly disagree with the given prompt that the immediate context and ambiance have major role to play in determining the attitudes of people rather than society as a whole. While I agree that there could be a few exceptions, I would like to state and elaborate two major reason for my stance against the given prompt.
First of all, the people's attitude is greatly influenced by the society in which they reside because the society is one integral part of human life. The society is where a person learns his/ her basic attributes from early childhood which eventually shapes up the future. For instance, a person who grew up in a violent society amidst the raging wars and crimes, tends to develop similar attitude.Humans are social animals by nature and it might not be very wise to consider that the society has little or no influence on the personal traits. The society makes up a large chunk of who the person really is and how he/ she behaves under various cirumstances.
Moreover, the parents and other family members, who are also the part of the same society in which a person grows up, play a vital role in shaping the attitude of the person for lifetime. The famous proverb " Morning shows the day" is very relevant in this case. That means, what a person learns as a child, in term of attitude or other traits, most probably remains the same for most of his life. For instance, lately, there is a huge surge of montessori and other child care centers that focus on the moral aspect of the child and promise to groom them better for future. If the immediate situations and surroundings were to influence that person's trait to such an extent, what is the purpose of keeping the focus on grooming a child in a better way? Why not let them live the way they like and rely on situation?
Admittedly, there can be a few exceptions where a person can really be pushed beyond his/ her comfort zone and compelled to act according to the situation. For instance, even if a person is known for his/ her well behaved and calm attitude, it is very likely that the person can lose his/ her temper during extreme conditions and turn violent.
To conclude, we have seen plethora of examples of how a kid raised in a well mannered society or a well behaved family is comparatively more composed and follows the basic decorum of society. On contrary, if we take out the society part and analyse a person in term of immediate response only, it could very well be a misleading outcome or some exceptions.
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...or my stance against the given prompt. First of all, the peoples attitude is gr...
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...e behaves under various cirumstances. Moreover, the parents and other family m...
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...and surroundings were to influence that persons trait to such an extent, what is the pu...
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... way they like and rely on situation? Admittedly, there can be a few exception...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, well, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59688195991 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49071469745 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512249443207 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7746843255 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0625 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186618916125 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063789999969 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555394978802 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10210752133 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571983038567 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.