True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and sup

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True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position

The humans are naturally one of the most creative creatures in the planet that tend to adjust themselves continuously based on various factors. The self analysis is one of the most important tools to measure where a person stands. This aligns nicely with my understanding that the person himself is nicely poised to measure his success on the basis of his standing against the goal set by himself. I mostly agree with the given prompt because of two major reasons enlisted below but, I do concede that there could be a few exceptions in case of complacency.
First of all, self analysis is one of the most important aspects of a successful person. There are a lot of strong examples of successful person who are the paragon of success, and one thing usually common in them is the capability of self-actuation. For instance, the well known businessman Elon Musk is pretty famous for his firm attitude. He admits that he himself is the most important critics and closest competitor of himself. He is an example to many who consider that the success need to be compared with others and is only possible in expense of declination of other counterparts. In contrary, humans, being the most intelligent creatures in the planet, are capable enough to set a goal for self and analyse the success based on the performance relative to the achievement of the goal.
Moreover, we can not deny the fact that a person himself is the true judge of his own capability. If not for the external influencing factors, a person in his conscious mind is always aware of how far can he go or how much he can achieve based on his capability. The will power and determination, two most important requisites of success are in the control of the person setting the goal. For instance, the most famous scientist of 20th century, Albeit Einstein was well known for his unique capability of being isolated from the general cacophonous crowd, and usually paced himself based on his own goals. He was rarely influenced by the success or fame of his counterparts and colleagues. Apparently, this attitude of knowing own capability and judging the success based on own goal never let him down.
However, it is not out of equation for a person to be over complacent with himself. Sometimes, the person tends to overestimate the success and forget what his true potential is. In this case, an external impetus or a critical perspective can play a vital role in accelerating the person in different echelon of success.
To conclude, although in some cases, a person requires external driving factor and critical direction to achieve desired success, primarily, it is the person himself who is more than capable to judge and analyse the success he achieved in respect to the goals that he defined for himself. To summarize, a person himself can be the most honest and capable judge of himself because of his own familiarization with personal trait and capability.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, first of all, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83665338645 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79721850384 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458167330677 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8158697094 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.619047619 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9047619048 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156806886094 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594868873943 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286039729704 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106162421729 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208796198122 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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