People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Human is a communicative creature that normally prefer to live within a group. Living in a society would be definitely effective to shape people’s attitude, but their immediate situations are playing a more important role in their perspective and attitude.
From the very beginning of a person’s life, he/she would be surrounded by his/her parents and family. They teach their kid the basic concept of the life and playing an important role in shaping his/her character. If they are religious, they will teach their child the principle of the religion and encourage him/her to be royal to these beliefs. Therefore, it obvious that family is very effective to shape their member’s attitude toward various subjects.
Continuing the path of the life, the kid goes to school and makes new friends. In the course of his/her education he/she will learn more about the concepts of the life and be affected by his/her friends and teachers. Before entering seriously, to society, the majority of a person’s character is shaped by his/her family and friends. Therefore, society would not have significant impact on people’s attitude, because the early stage of learning is happened in the childhood instead of the adulthood.
Some might argue that society’s role is more significant than a person’s immediate situation or surrounding. This idea has some merit on the surface. However, society consists of people that have nurtured within their family members and friends. Every person has his/her own character which has shaped in their lives before entering society. Therefore, immediate surrounding is the foremost stage of nurturing for all members of a society. Apparently, they may affect each other in the society due to the various communications and different beliefs, but it’s less likely that their attitude would change within the society. The most part of the human’s learning is in their childhood which normally, they hardly ever may have the chance of communicating with society without their parents and friends in their childhood.
All in all, immediate situations and surroundings play a more important role in people’s attitude toward various subjects than the whole society because family and friends are more effective in shaping a person’s perspective and character than society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...perspective and character than society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37362637363 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80324802556 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7367935745 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192735179943 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644699464732 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604247050309 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124982494224 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752523670346 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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