People should question the rule of authority as opposed to accepting them passively
The issue of 'People should question the rule of authority as opposed to accepting them passively' is debatable one.
On one hand questioning rules of authority would help to avoid and fight against injustice, and on the other hand it might
create a chaos in countries that follows democracy.Howerver, in the final analysis I agree with author's claim as it has greater advantages.
A main reason is that, questioning a rule do not necessarily leads to action but reason behind accepting that rule can be justified.
It helps to keep transparency between those who rule and one who are getting ruled. Adding to this in cases where majority of the population
belives that rule is avoiding justice and decision was not fair, people can question it and force authority to make proper changes in the rules.
For example, formation of United States of America.For years under British rule citizens in the colonies were unfairly taxed and treated accordance
with British law.Not untill when some powerful men questioned British rule and stood up to defend their beliefs. as a result of which,
colonies started thinking themselves as an independent entity.Years later U.S. became democracy lead by people.
Another reason for my view is that, humans should question the authority if it goes against moral and their beliefs.
For example,In India, Older people in village used to be local authority. Before 1947 it was a rule that if a husband of a woman dies
she will have to live an ascetic life and was abadoned from all rituals that were celebrated by local citizens.Unless some people
started questioning about these rules and defended it saying that, these womans have a full right to live a normal life.
Some might argue that questioning the authority might lead to chaos in country.I believe its true because, in democratic countries if each person
at all levels started questionig rule it would be difficult to pass any law. hence there has to be control on level up to which you can question
authority but at the same time it is imporatant to question rules that people think is morally not acceptable or involves injustice.
To sum up, while there are arguments to be made from both side,it is clear that there are greater advantages in People questioning
rules of authority as oppoed to accepting them passively.Hence, I agree with author's claim.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04303797468 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76912035847 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3546140899 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.230769231 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3846153846 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.97078651685 362% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46366523367 0.243740707755 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181898774087 0.0831039109588 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189523745421 0.0758088955206 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152401817468 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173380630483 0.0667264976115 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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