People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting
your position, you should consider the reasons for which the statement may or may not be true
and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The rule of authority in the 21st century comes in various form. To a large extent each individual is empowered with an authority directly or indirectly. In the scenario of this issue, i will be dissecting the authority that arises as a result of democracy and the needs for people to question the authority rather than accepting it passively. Democracy in its literal term is a type of governing system where the populace have the free will to choose whomever they want as their leader while simultaneously empowering such individual with authority above others.
When democratic system was created, the need for questioning of authority was identified. It is one of the reasons why the judiciary system was crated as an arm of the government. Hence rather than accepting rules passively, the populace have the power to challenge whatever rule they are not comfortable with in the court of law with th believe of getting a redress or explanation about such law and why it is a necessary and valid action.
It is in human nature to get power drunken when one is in a place of higher authority. This makes an individual susceptible to making laws and policy that are at the detriment of he populace. Even though, people might be aware that the law is against them, they tend to accept it dogmatically because they believe there is little they can do to challenge the authority. In a society where the higher authority are held accountable by consistent critical and necessary challenge of the government rules, such society always thrive in prosperity and goodwill.
The challenge of authority to a large extent is a means of feedback to the government which will prompt them to know that they are doing something wrong and they need to check on themselves. Feedback is very critical in effective communication and the government as an institution should identify this as a yardstick for measuring their success. For an institution that its populace did not challenge its rule of authority, such institution will b riddled with numerous ineptitude ranging from corruption, sabotage, instability of economy, poor educational system and many more as such institution will have a care free attitude towards its populace.
Conclusively, another system of questioning the rule of authority adopted was the subjection of the ruling authority to election which normally held in most countries after four years. This election gives the populace to reevaluate how well they are satisfied with the leadership of an administration and who else they want to saddle with the authority for the next few years. Hence, consciously or subconsciously, in a democratic system, the masses are empowered to challenge the rules of authority they are subjected to during a particular period of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...irectly. In the scenario of this issue, i will be dissecting the authority that a...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of the populace'?
Suggestion: of the populace
...ws and policy that are at the detriment of he populace. Even though, people might be aware tha...
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Line 7, column 579, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
..., poor educational system and many more as such institution will have a care free ...
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Line 9, column 543, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ey are subjected to during a particular period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2331.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07843137255 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9621041944 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472766884532 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 763.2 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0660032205 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.117647059 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160378306727 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581568131297 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386108521747 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978154682058 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341008840707 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.