People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
What makes someone a good decision maker? In my humble opinion, a good decision maker can either be the one who always keeps the consequences of a deed in mind and be ready to face them or another one who is just listening to the voice of his or her heart. It would be a restricted and narrow minded supposition to claim that a good decision maker does not combine emotions with logic, on the other hand, I think what makes us a good decision maker is our ability to find the balance in between. Experts say that while women are more towards making emotion based decisions and men vice versa, however, this is just a sexist point of view. Any people can make either kind of decision, depends on the aftermath or the concept of the situation.
The author of the prompt says that a human being who is making emotion based decisions and then justifying them with cerebral qualities is doomed to be a bad decision maker. However, why is combining both qualities, presented to the humankind by omnipotent powers is disregarded? For instance, consider yourself being late to work and running in the streets in a frenzied state and you see a person in poor conditions, maybe a mendicant or a very old lady in need. You have to make a decision, would you help the person or would you rather prefer to rush to work?
An emotion based decision would be being helpful and being logical requires keeping the pace and proceeding as if nothing happened. Let's suppose that you listened to your heart and helped the mendicant or the old lady and was late for work. What would be the logical explanation of your decision? A logical explanation obliges one to do the math: "What would happen if you did not help?", versus "What happened since you helped?" For many of the people who really thought of helping the poor, what to write under the first would be such sentences like this: "I would be thinking about it during the day once or twice and it might occur to me during the next days." And the explanation of the latter is, just, being late to work. Here is a logical explanation of an emotion based decision: Even though the subject listened to her or his heart and made a decision that seemed worse on cerebral values, the aftermath of the deed on logical terms is actually be beneficial for them. The person achieves a peace of mind at the time and does not spend any more time dealing with the "What ifs" in his or her mind afterwards.
However, this might not hold true for each incident. Decisions made with following the feelings might also misdirect the subject. For example, helping someone who does not necessarily need your help solely and facing harsh consequences is not a desirable status to be in. For instance, let's suppose your friend needs some cash, however, he does not seem to be good at commercial jobs and continuously gets fired. What is more, he spends all the money he has on gambling and ends up with even more debt. Since you probably like your friend, your emotions -especially the pity- would lead you to helping him. However, after listening to your feelings, if you try to justify it with your logic, you would be facing the fact that you are a poor decision maker, as the author of the prompt asserts.
The history is full of good decisions and bad decisions and there is no straight line in between. For example, if the pilot of the fighter jet who landed the Big Fat the atomic bomb on Hiroshima decided that he cannot do it at the last minute, it would be an emotion based decision. While one part of the World would be cherishing and contratulating him on his moral decision, the other part would be demonizing him and he would probably be chastised by his superiors. This shows us that the justification of decisions actually depends on myriad of different factors. There is no such decision that can be justified according to one element.
As a result, dividing decisions into two categories as emotion or logic based and disabling people from combining both while decision making and doing the aftermath is not completely plausible. Human beings are creatures with many layers and the number of decisions they make cannot be dovetailed to one category or the other. A completely sentimental decision can be cherished by logical people or expostulated by the same group, on the other hand, any decision which is seemingly quite logical might actually be quite against cerebral values. A sentimental decision which is bad for you on paper would bring you peace of mind for the many days or maybe years following that particular day. Which is, after doing the math, showing that a sentimental decision can also be even more logical than the other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... and proceeding as if nothing happened. Lets suppose that you listened to your heart...
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Line 5, column 986, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...f the deed on logical terms is actually be beneficial for them. The person achieve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, may, really, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 49.0 19.5258426966 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 37.0 14.8657303371 249% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 33.0505617978 215% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 58.6224719101 160% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3899.0 2235.4752809 174% => OK
No of words: 830.0 442.535393258 188% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69759036145 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.36746873133 4.55969084622 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55380793498 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 346.0 215.323595506 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41686746988 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1220.4 704.065955056 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8710309482 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.84375 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84375 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328153369844 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112214860887 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695713330044 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21537178503 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628845493245 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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