People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Decision making has now become a task like climbing Mount Everest. Decision making is what people nowadays fail at. They are so much stressed and under immense emotional and peer pressure that they fail to make a correct decision and often take decisions based on emotions and then later justify them with logic.But taking emotional decisions is not wrong and these people thus cannot be labelled as poor decision makers.
One famous example is of Mukesh Ambani, the multimillionare business man. His brother's company was under a great loss, and to help his brother recover from the loss, he bought the company and transformed it into another company. His decision to pull-out his brother from a huge loss was an emotional decision, as he would not want his brother to incur such a massive loss. He then justified the media reporters by a logical explanation, and now his new company is a billion dollar company. Thus taking an emotional decision to help his brother would not make him a poor decision maker.
The best example is of a mother, who are very much emotionally attached to their children and family and she has to take many emotional decisions and then justify those decisions to other people with a logical explanation,doesn't make her a poor decision maker.
As she had taken those decisions for the betterment of their children and family,but still has to give a plausible explanation for her decisions taken.
Decisions should not only be based on emotions as they can often lead to inconsequential conclusions and one might call them poor decision makers.Although if decisions were made with both emotional and logical thinking then this will help to get a plausible outcome and these people can be called as good decision makers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 294.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95578231293 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75254983829 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506802721088 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.646914977 60.3974514979 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.454545455 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358401703864 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151340929216 0.0831039109588 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113404719429 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236866493033 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945846589723 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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