People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers
rationalization of decisions based on emotion isn't something that we are unfamiliar with. The controversiality of debate itself is pompous. What makes a decision poor? Does it have something to do with improper analysis while taking a decision? Emotions and intuition are strong influencing elements in the decision making process in human beings. Some things cannot be measured therefore are best dealt with intuition. Justification of the same with logic creates an argument for the decision maker to trust the process. It has nothing to do with poor decision makers.
Why was Apple able to become the most profitable company in the year 2012? Steve Jobs believed in the idea of emotionally taking the decision as it allowed the users to connect with the design which was created with a matching idea. Clearly, his decision served his company well. In interviews he justified and explained the need to take such influential decisions with emotion. Ultimately, taking the decision emotionally allows us to justify it with logic because in mot cases these decisions are beneficial therefore this paradigm of taking decisions emotionally can produce something that leaves a mark and reminds us not to blindly trust logic.
Poor Decision makers are the ones who aren't able to act on their decisions. No matter the decision might me taken with a emotional or logical stance , if you can't act on it, it is bound to be a poor decision. For example a person with maladroitity wants to to learn ballet takes a decision based on emotion to pursue the vocation. Logically this decision is flawed. But, the will power to act counts significantly in determining the success rate of a decision. If this person is not willing to go through to drudgery then of course whether her decision is warranted with logic or not.
Justification of emotions is a method of expressing the power of intuition. We often fail to understand that the emotions are an aspect part of our life and play a huge impact in decision making. This is what makes us different than the computer machines which are known to take decision based on logic and are always assumed to be correct. for instance the solution proposed by a artificial intelligence to deal with spam mails is to kill the people who spam - logically being correct, but humanely it isn't.
In conclusion, emotions play a key role in our lives and separate us from the logical machines which are ruthless, hence justification of the emotion is fine as long as it fulfilling its intended purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94600938967 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81077291184 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537558685446 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0847831378 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7916666667 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.20833333333 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.568511645186 0.243740707755 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178207447121 0.0831039109588 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110507470691 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313554072938 0.150359130593 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138390298108 0.0667264976115 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.