People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
I am agree with the context, as in first part which is saying about decision making in presence of emotion is not going to be a good decision because your emotions are temporary and when your emotion is coated by anther emotion then you realize about the cons of your decisions.
Human beings are not able to control their emotions, and they also have fluctuation in their moods which also affect the emotion. Because of this reason, emotion is temporary process which is going to change on fraction of second. When one is feeling sad at that times they covered by negative thoughts and that negativity control their mind and not let it be as it was before. Negativity makes person completely depressed and also down their self confidence level. Which results in, that person underestimate own self so, any decision they take during that situation is not going to justify their actual potential. In a contrary, if a person is felling to much happiness, at that time they feel like a king/queen of the world which makes them over confident by overestimating them self and they take any decision during this state of mind then it will going to be a worst decision. Which is also clarify the second part of the sentence showing about the applying logic to justify their decision makes them poor decision makers.
This is proven in our history, All the world wars are result of the emotions like anger, jealousy, and greediness. There are so many examples of leaders who had make a decision on base of greediness and ultimately they were became a poor decision makers. As an example Gandhiji after making the India as independent nation they had to choices for president one is Jawaharlal Nehru and other is sardar Vallabhbhai patel. But he chose Jawaharlal Nehru and gave gave logic that he is a powerful person so we should select them, which afterward proved wrong because he took so many bad decision of India which divided the whole India in separate parts.
At the end of this context I want to conclude that always take decision with stable mind any decision in interference of emotions are not going to be a best decision even though justify by logic, it not a quality of goood decision maker.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
I am agree with the context, as in first part whic...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ze about the cons of your decisions. Human beings are not able to control the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...o change on fraction of second. When one is feeling sad at that times they covere...
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Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
.... In a contrary, if a person is felling to much happiness, at that time they feel ...
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Line 3, column 860, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
... during this state of mind then it will going to be a worst decision. Which is also c...
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Line 3, column 872, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... state of mind then it will going to be a worst decision. Which is also clarify t...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n it will going to be a worst decision. Which is also clarify the second part of the ...
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Line 3, column 904, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'clarified'.
Suggestion: clarified
...g to be a worst decision. Which is also clarify the second part of the sentence showing...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ision makes them poor decision makers. This is proven in our history, All t...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...are so many examples of leaders who had make a decision on base of greediness and ul...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... of greediness and ultimately they were became a poor decision makers. As an example G...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: gave
...atel. But he chose Jawaharlal Nehru and gave gave logic that he is a powerful person so w...
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Line 6, column 152, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ference of emotions are not going to be a best decision even though justify by lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47619804437 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496103896104 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6851414313 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6153846154 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366641887218 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13452064008 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140512963924 0.0758088955206 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25968956524 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968909979384 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
I am agree with the context, as in first part whic...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ze about the cons of your decisions. Human beings are not able to control the...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o change on fraction of second. When one is feeling sad at that times they covere...
^^
Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
.... In a contrary, if a person is felling to much happiness, at that time they feel ...
^^
Line 3, column 860, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
... during this state of mind then it will going to be a worst decision. Which is also c...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 872, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... state of mind then it will going to be a worst decision. Which is also clarify t...
^
Line 3, column 890, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n it will going to be a worst decision. Which is also clarify the second part of the ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 904, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'clarified'.
Suggestion: clarified
...g to be a worst decision. Which is also clarify the second part of the sentence showing...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ision makes them poor decision makers. This is proven in our history, All t...
^^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...are so many examples of leaders who had make a decision on base of greediness and ul...
^^^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... of greediness and ultimately they were became a poor decision makers. As an example G...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: gave
...atel. But he chose Jawaharlal Nehru and gave gave logic that he is a powerful person so w...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 152, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ference of emotions are not going to be a best decision even though justify by lo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47619804437 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496103896104 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6851414313 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6153846154 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366641887218 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13452064008 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140512963924 0.0758088955206 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25968956524 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968909979384 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.