Topic:- The most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Any leader who is quickly and easily influence by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
The above claim is well known truth to become a successful leader, indeed is proven in our history and still its proving evidence of acceptance. I completely agree with this assertion. We have lots of examples of great leaders who lived their life by following their principles without thinking of success and at the and they became a big example of accomplished leaders.
By elaborating my view, first let’s see same examples of great leaders like Bill gates who accomplished his dreams and as we known he introduce revolutionary technology in computer world, and he is still working actively without sacrificing values and principles. He had faced problems during his early point, but he never gives up and at the end he got success. Not only he is great leader but also, he is great human being too. He is investing most of his income in philanthropy works like by proving education to poor children and so on. This is can say great leader who not only achieve their dreams but also successfully live them by sticking to their principles of life.
This only one example, we have seen many leaders like great Politician Abraham Lincoln, John F Kennedy, George Washington, and from technological sector Mark Zuckerberg, Jeff Bezos, Steve Jobs they all have started their career from crash never thought about hurdles. During their early journey they had offered beguiling proffer, yet they inexorably followed their dreams by consistently sticking to their principles and objectives. Even our great scientists have faced so many problems during their research experiments, what if after failing so many times Thomas Alva Edison left his experiment? Did we get such wonderful invention which took revolution in our life? Not possible. Leaders are the great examples who shadow by every person who want to achieve something in their life. By reading biographies and encouraging videos on great leaders, one can get encouragement to face their problems and dwell their dreams.
A great leader live their life with remarkable qualities, disciplines, and values. A leader with “just go with flow” attitude, without having any values can never achieve their goals. Let’s see by taking an example, in multinational company there are two different managers who are also leader of their team. The both provided one task of manufacture 1,00,000 candies in one day. Here, one manager has a vast experience on his field and the other have lesser than him. The manager who has more experience is only focused on the completion of task so without taking care of his team member he started pressurized them by just poking them in every hour. On the other hand, the manager with less experience help his team by solving hurdles and took care of quality of product. So, without affecting the quality of products he accomplished his task with the help of his team. This manager is appreciated not only by his team members but also awarded for his achievements. This can manifest that most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
At the end, I accord that a leader who have some values and astonishing qualities can achieve anything they want. On the contrary one can never become a leader who didn’t have any values or disciplines. A person can never achieve their dreams they quickly and easily influence by shifts in popular opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
...s who accomplished his dreams and as we known he introduce revolutionary technology i...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'introduces'.
Suggestion: introduces
...omplished his dreams and as we known he introduce revolutionary technology in computer wo...
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Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y sticking to their principles of life. This only one example, we have seen many...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, well, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2866.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 568.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04577464789 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70103244604 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492957746479 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 886.5 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4358042381 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.148148148 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.037037037 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7037037037 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203971916638 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064410098438 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901532783862 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124716452904 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582475251109 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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