Claim: No act is done purely for the benefit of others.
Reason: All actions — even those that seem to be done for other people — are based on self-interest
In the above context the author is claiming that “No act is done purly for the benefits of others and also give the reason for that by saying that “all action- even those that seem to be done for the other people are based o self-interest. I am mostly agree with context as now a days most of the people surround us look selfish. I have elaborated my points in below paragraph.
Addition to above point of view, During our journey of life we have been met so many new people in the world where by interection with them one can find the main purpose of their well being behaviour I have one hypothethical example to show my point, in one big multinational company , Managers are helping their subordinates to gain attaintion from their managers to get bonus or pramotions or intensives. Where the boss of the company provide so many facilities to his\her employees so they can take more work from them and get the benefits for their self too. Though it will going to be win win situation because if the company didn’t do well annually how can the employees going to get the salary. Yet the main purpose of the company manager looks purly for the employees but in the hidden side he or she is the one who going to get the main benefits.
By further elaborating the about point, self benefits are not always a bad intention most of the time due to desire of getting the advantage from the work one can do so many wellfare works, in our society now a days, there are so many well being organizations are running around us where are providing volunteering works into the needed areas or surbub. So many naïve graduates who are new to the industry of their field, are also participating to do volunteering but most of them having their main hidden notion of getting self benefits because volunteer word in to their curriculum vitea going to show their mature behaviour towards the society.
In the first paragraph I said mostly agree with the cialm because, if a person going to want to start in new bussiness to earn money however, the first intention of him of her is gaining the sefl benefits though it will going to get involve more people in to that bussiness and which ultimetly providing the jobs to the unemployees and this will be in result of getting better economy and at the and make the nation strong and better nation to live life. So by watching it as a big picture it’s aellivate the being selfish effect, primary purpose of gaining self benefits of the bussinessman.
At the end, The claim is appropriate but the reason for that is partially appropriate beacase if the act is working benifitionary for the people of the nation then the self gaining can over weight by the benefits of that act.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...ove context the author is claiming that “No act is done purly for the benefits of...
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Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...give the reason for that by saying that “all action- even those that seem to be d...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... are based o self-interest. I am mostly agree with context as now a days most of the ...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...rest. I am mostly agree with context as now a days most of the people surround us look sel...
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Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereby'?
Suggestion: whereby
...een met so many new people in the world where by interection with them one can find the ...
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Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... point, in one big multinational company , Managers are helping their subordinates...
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Line 2, column 578, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...fits for their self too. Though it will going to be win win situation because if the ...
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Line 2, column 590, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: win
...ir self too. Though it will going to be win win situation because if the company didn’t...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ost of the time due to desire of getting the advantage from the work one can do s...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... so many wellfare works, in our society now a days, there are so many well being organizat...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...many wellfare works, in our society now a days, there are so many well being organizat...
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...aining the sefl benefits though it will going to get involve more people in to that b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 489.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56032719836 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53064516108 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460122699387 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.089708704 60.3974514979 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.833333333 118.986275619 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.75 23.4991977007 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271892038442 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118681183327 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.213094465177 0.0758088955206 281% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199715879948 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203513138024 0.0667264976115 305% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.06 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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