People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
We have seen people who put a lot of thought in their decision making process and yet, they somehow fail to serve the purpose of their decision; while on the other hand, people who take decisions emotionally, sometimes end up achieving great heights.
People who use their heart and emotions to make decisions always seem to be happy at first. But the satisfaction of following our own instinct is nothing but ephemeral. People with more Emotional Quotient tend to be sensitive, and are most susceptible to be misused or played by apathetic people with equivocation; which is morally wrong.
Also, we are always taught that "One who fails to plan, always plans to fail." This implies that taking decisions based on emotions and then justifying it with logic is not at all appropriate if one wants to burgeon in life. Putting a lot of thought in our actions and plans always lands you in a better position.
In addition to this, people who take decisions with their emotion don't really anticipate the consequences and thus end up getting stuck in a place where they don't know how to proceed. It only deteriorates their emotional stability.
We must also acknowledge that people who take decisions emotionally are always happier than other people; because they are simply satisfied by the fact they are happy in their own way of living and not following anyone's footsteps to sustain. We have seen examples such as Bill Gates who happens to be a college dropout student, and yet, he is most successful business person ever. It can be argued that it was more of a logical and thoughtful decision, but dropping out of Harvard University seems less likely to be a logical decision. Thus, we can say, people who follow instincts, or think emotionally don't always fall down if they know what path to take to reach the summit.
However, people who make decisions emotionally always cover up their regrets with some logical reasoning so as to hide the fallacy of their decisions. They will try harder and harder to prove that their decision (based on emotion) was correct and how they don't regret the choices they made in the past.
Finally, it can be said that decision making is a process which strongly needs a complete thought process so as to be aware of prescience of the consequences and anticipate any ill behavior that might follow. Such thoughtful and planned decisions rarely turn out to be wrong; while on the contrary, decisions made on the basis of emotions are oftenly poor and thus turn out to be remorseful.
Hence, decision making should always be thoughtful and people who make decisions based on emotion and then underpin it with logic are nothing but ignorant decision makers who don't understand the importance of anticipating situations in future that may or may not affect your decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, really, so, then, thus, while, as to, in addition, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90814196242 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61805895246 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480167014614 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9551637929 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.294117647 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1764705882 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42676547387 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150389030777 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118771158557 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238467139169 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942869137751 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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