The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or any other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the more compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A good leader is someone who brings out the best from his team. The prompt suggests that the best way for any society to prepare its adolescent generation for leadership in government, industry or any other field is by planting a seed of cooperation in them. I would like to agree with the assertion and discuss a few points about how it stands true.
The skillset required for a good leader is not only limted to cooperation, but also requires persistence, compassion, decision making, critical thinking and many more. However, the most important factor is to be able to use these skills. An omniscient leader who lacks in proper implementation of aforementioned skills will do no good to the society, or any organization he or she works for.
Talking about cooperation, it is the most important aspect of leadership. A leader who does not cooperate with others is setting himself up for failure. For example, the president of the United States and the President of China are both individually successful leaders. But the trade war between United States and China has increased the tension between these two, which is slowly leading us towards the third world war. If only these two countries decide to come together and seal a deal which is beneficial for all, these tensions will automatically diminish. If they fail to do so, the consequences are extremely tragic and disadvantageous for both parties, which ultimately is a failure.
Another example is, the international tensions between India and Pakistan. The rivalry of India and Pakistan and their era long disputes over possession of Kashmir have only exacerbated the healthy relationship between these two countries over the years. If both of these countries come forward and cooperate with each other and agree to be on common grounds, everything will be solved. This will stop the imminent war and save lives of thousands of soldiers.
It must be acknowledged that the competition is part of the play, and it gives us an edge over our potential opponent. But excessive competition is toxic and eventually leads us to a tragedy. Thus, if we plan to live in a better future which values humanity and its precious aspects, then we must start investing in the youth, because ultimately they are the future leaders of our community. If today's kids are influenced with good morals and ethics, then they will stick with those principles for a long time and refrain themselves from indulging in unscrupulous activities.
In conclusion, if we instill a sense of cooperation in young people, then it will eventually help them to become a compassionate leader in government, industry or any other field and they will surely contribute to the greater good of the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, third, thus, for example, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01758241758 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89891359585 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5286064134 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248793492388 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646502665947 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844599887364 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131277587892 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094803368108 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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