People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
In my opinion, People who make there choices and decisions based on their emotion and try to prove valid afterwards are poor decision makers, It is correct and I agree with this statement. Why I agree with this statement that I explained in further paragraphes.
As we know human have various emotions and at the same time every human have mind and can think too. The function of mind and emotions is different but if one use both with keeping balance between them then their is greater chances that decision is right. For example consider terrorist you must have to agree that religious and faith towards it or anything is one kind of emotion and as we know every terrorist have some emotion towards their task and that is why they do it. And as we know every terrorist justify it by saying that it is wish of god and etc. But this decision is wrong as we all know.
Similar, In todays generation we can see that people fall in love and go into relationship easily and at the same time divorce rate is also increased. Now fall in love with other person and go into relationship on the basis of temporary emotions is obviously wrong and we can see that in terms of divorce rate, breakups and etc. Today most of teenagers and even adults face heart breaks, breakups and just because of this they go into depression sometimes and this is the proof that decision made by them earlier is wrong becasue before going into relationshi they should think twice properly, But as we know human nature, So every adult and teenager who faced breakups and heart breaks or divorce try to justify it by saying that their partner is not faithful and all. But it is wrong because it is equal mistake from both side as they both should think properly before they went into it.
On the other hand, Person who makes decision on sudden emotion is not always wrong take example of girl who had been harassing by some boys and if see react on the basis of sudden emotion she was feeling like if she hit them with the rod or run away from their to save her. Then she justifies her decision then she is totally correct beacause what she had done was the need of that time.
So keeping both the points in mind,I firmly believe that every coin has a two side so this has two sides too.Still I support the statement because in majority decision of the life on the basis of emotion which are justified afterwards have greater probablity to become not accurate or wrong.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48545861298 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23687694244 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456375838926 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.10461322 60.3974514979 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.214285714 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9285714286 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273745363751 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10673135511 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115324575202 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179740791064 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104218634427 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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