People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
Decision making process help human being to take accurate decisions during any kind to substantial event in which he needs to choose between two options or to have his own opinion. According to the author of this prompt, people who make decision based on emotions and justify them afterwards are poor decision makers. In my opinion, I agree with the author, as completely dependent on emotions to take a stance will not provide the weight to handle any situation correctly and be beneficial to the person.
Making decisions through depending on our emotions and taking actions according to them will bind our knowledge of our mind to think and take responsible and accurate steps to sustain our goals. While dependent on our emotions, we may take some stance in which we have an substantial drawback which will surely demote us in our later lives and will lead to depression and sadness. Thus, truly dependent on emotions and going with the flow would not help in achieving our goals and taking stands when we need to think properly and scrutenise the situation and accordingly make decision.
In some situatien, when we go with the flow of our emotions, we finally get into trouble and eventually need to provide an explanation for our act. Such kind to decision making process which needs justification, does not seems wright and does not provide any kind of support to our motives as it be purely based on our emotions and not our will.
Decision based on emotions will truly harm and divert our goal of achivement our dreams and building an identity in society. For example, the employee of multinational company takes a decision completely depending on his emotions and not according to the schema of decisions which help to provide an substantial proof and evidence that the decision is write. Then such decision taken will surely devastate the company as well as his reputation and will loose all his goals to achieve as he might get demotivated or lead to wrong path.
In conclusion, we cannot depend on our emotions while making any kind of decision and need to develope an habit to evaluate and
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e may take some stance in which we have an substantial drawback which will surely ...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...ess which needs justification, does not seems wright and does not provide any kind of...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...ess which needs justification, does not seems wright and does not provide any kind of...
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Line 7, column 298, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...hema of decisions which help to provide an substantial proof and evidence that the...
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Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
...proof and evidence that the decision is write. Then such decision taken will surely d...
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Line 7, column 454, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...pany as well as his reputation and will loose all his goals to achieve as he might ge...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y kind of decision and need to develope an habit to evaluate and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86426592798 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60475614359 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462603878116 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.2992732976 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0833333333 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.21951772744 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269739653646 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133260126701 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962749397277 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181180704987 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824846971737 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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