People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
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This topic raises a thought-provoking issue of whether the actions of the people during the emotions should be justified or not. Indisputdely, emotions play an important role in decisions making of most people nevertheless most of the decisions go down and wrong because of the lack of sense while being emotional. I would strongly agree that the people who make decisions based on emotions and try to justify them are poor decision-makers.
Emotions are an important part of the day-to-day life of every human being. According to the author of the book The Emotional Intelligence, Daniel khaman says that these emotions are essential for our survival. They have been a part of the limpid part of the brain which is one of the early parts of brian. They help us to remember the bad experience we had so that whenever we are in any such situation again we may make a better decision. For example, when a child touches a hot pot the pain which he feels is stored in his brain as emotion, and whenever he has seen such a pot he doesn't touch it.
However, these emotions are not always good when we are about to make any decisions. Whenever we are angry, scared, or sad, the emotional part of the brain takes control of the things preventing our logical brain to make decisions. For example, a cashier at a bank who was completely in debt decided to steal money from the bank. He was scared that his family will be on the road if he didn't do something to pay his debt. His emotions hijacked his brain and in this state, he stole the money. Later when he was caught he revealed the reason behind his actions.
People who are in a state of depression and suicide are also examples of wrong decision-making. During the depression, emotions make the person blind and don't let him see the options available to him to get out of the situation. To illustrate, let look at an example of one of my classmates, after the sudden death of her mother she was left in shock which later turned into depression. After a few months, she committed suicide as she was unable to cope with the truth that her mother was no more. Several people commit crimes such as murder, rape when they are overtaken by emotions.
Conversely, there have been cases in which emotions played an important role in decision-making. For example, when a robber invaded a house, a father protected his family from the armed robber in a fight which resulted in the death of the invader. In this case, the father's actions can be justified.
In conclusion, emotions are important but a person should be very careful while making decisions based on emotions. Without any such efforts, the person can be considered a poor decision-maker.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65546218487 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71333268905 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502100840336 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4517687624 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264937288288 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799247087144 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917485739519 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156510209167 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112869951325 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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