The perceived greatness of any political leader has more to do with the challenges faced by that leader than with any of his or her inherent skills and abilities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you either agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not be true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The topic raises a thought proving issue of whether inherent skills or challenges are faced making a superior leader. Indusipdetly the challenging situations do make someone better at the given role. However, the skills and abilities of the person do play a vital role in his/her duties.
so, I would strongly agree that talent is significant when it comes to becoming a great leader.
Firstly, a person becomes a leader when he decides to be one rather than someone making him. For him to take this decision he has to be confident in his abilities. According to the book Emotional intelligence, children who have a natural inclination towards a particular skill become better at it, compared to the ones who are taught. That's why the term born leaders are coined. So, it's a person's inborn skill to lead people which makes a leader in the first place. Leaders like Mahatma Gandhi who were self-made decided by themselves to lead the freedom fight. It was his faith in himself that a fight can be won by non-violence that made him the father of the nation of India.
Secondly, not everyone can withstand the obstacles the role of being a leader brings. For example, if a person is fighting for a cause against a corporation that has political support and is threatened for his life. Only a courageous person can continue his fight. In the above-mentioned book, it is said that during difficult times only an emotionally intelligent person: one who can motivate himself in the toughest of days, stand by himself. This needs natural skills to continue as a leader. Nelson Mandela who was put in jail for 27 years had the hope that one day he would be out to celebrate what he was fighting for, freedom from racism. It was his patience and persistence which made him a memorable leader of South Africa.
Despite these reasons, it can be argued that the challenges faced will make an ultimate leader. As said, "Only the big waves make skilled sailors".However, if the person doesn't have the internal motivation to withstand that challenges and confidence that he can go through those tough times, he won't succeed at being a leader.
Leadership by far depends more on the personality of the one in the role.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80366492147 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80989574597 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552356020942 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5698704579 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.380952381 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1904761905 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170890815543 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626055447726 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440797474265 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974549088578 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435739502648 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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