A glance on the meaning of behavior as a wide concept presented on extensive science like psychology, that will shed light on a question that has long instigated debate, that is, whether people's behavior is largely determined by external forces. However, some people claim that human behavior acquired from their owned experiences. Unless, there are pros and cons for each side. From my point of view, I partly agree with the statement. To substantiate my case the following paragraphs will illustrate my reasons and examples to elaborate my preference.
To begin with, the first and foremost point coming to the mind is that, the abstract meaning for behavior is varied from one to one. For example, the first definition is the innate and the unspoken methods of dealing with other as a type of communication process between the humankind. The second meaning is kind of science that we have to learn it. For instance, the baby crying its innate behavior indicating some needs, whereas being polite when the baby getting older is a learned behavior.
Moreover, another vital point should be taken into consideration, some contends that human behavior comes from forces, but we should bear in mind that there are myriad factors, firstly, the habits and traditions for any country can affect the human attitudes. For example, in Jordan to kiss your parents hand indicate high level of politeness, but might be on other country indicates different meaning. Second, its worthwhile to mention it, the educational level may lead to pattern of behavior, for instance, who are educated has a chance to get more meaningful behaviors due to facing different background that will shape his/her behavior.
Furthermore, whilst others suggest precisely that shaping any behavior depends on the person experience, the foreseen vision is true because sometime we have to live the situation and creates our own behavior, It is unreasonable to build my own behavior depends on the other's life and situations. In other words, what is it acceptable for me is not mandatory acceptable for people.
In conclusion, due to aforementioned ground that I mentioned before, it is ambivalent to determine the human behaviors in general, hence, the behavior comes from all the external factors that have the greater commensurate compering with the own making behaviors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, kind of, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20580474934 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78511759167 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575197889182 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.3932566139 60.3974514979 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.533333333 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 5.21951772744 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15414396175 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557726494223 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296069085093 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899578077158 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269380814426 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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