The perceived greatness of any political leader has more to do with the challenges faced by that leader than with any of his or her inherent skills and abilities
Most politicians encounter various issues like; environmental problems, territorial disputes, economical issues, humanitarian crisis and many more challenges, both domestically and internationally. Clearly, some of which has great impact not only on the quality of peoples’ lives but also and more importantly on their lifespan. Therefore, facing those monumental challenges is the main pillar on the greatness of any political leader.
There is no doubt that having inherent abilities and qualities is very important for any person who has responsibilities and challenges to face. Nevertheless, it is not a sufficient factor to determine the quality of leadership of a politician. Most of us can recall politicians who are having tremendous abilities to be very successful businesspersons, innovators and pioneers in their field, yet when started engaging in politics, their judgment became very poor and their decision-making turned to be completely obscure.
Great leaders are remembered for their actions. Being able to leave an imprint in our world is something to look up to in a leader, and a true leader can only accomplish this by enduring reality and being able to confront tangled problems that has great influence on all of us. Interesting character, high skills and great abilities might be great indicators for impressing talks, strategies and plans, but they are not satisfactory for true leadership in politics.
One may say that having inherent qualities and skills will secure a leader with more innovation and creativity in addressing varied challenges. However, political challenges are different; they are extremely puzzling, often ambiguous and sometimes requires audacious actions. Therefore, it is not enough to have skills, but the exact means to be able to solve and face those puzzles. Leaders who face challenges know how to handle those conditions, as they are already equipped with these basic and most important traits.
There were times in history where leaders faced considerable challenges that changed the face of world to this day. Abraham Lincoln who broke the chains of slavery, Franklin Roosevelt whose decision to react to the attack in Pearl Harbor and intervene in World War II, and many more leaders’ actions are part of a long list of significant leaders of all times, where they let their actions delineate and define their personality and who they really are.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...nmental problems, territorial disputes, economical issues, humanitarian crisis and many mo...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'facing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: facing
...who has responsibilities and challenges to face. Nevertheless, it is not a sufficient f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48541114058 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07997653303 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570291777188 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3423024818 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.866666667 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305623582426 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108968232771 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864593336148 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160849370943 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516204057078 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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