The perceived greatness of any political leader has more to do with the challenges faced by that leader than with any of his or her inherent skills and abilities
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you either agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not be true and explain how this considerations shape your position.
Any political leader at one time or the other has been faced with a number of challenges. The extent to which a political leader will be great has to do with a number of factors such as diplomacy, diligence, discipline, ability to manage and overcome challenges, excellent communication skill etc.
But of all the numerous abilities he possesses, the challenges faced by that political leader has the greatest power in landing him in greatness. Challenges help men to dig deep into their inherent skills and abilities and strive to overcome it. It spurs them to do the impossible. It triggers them to utilize faith in order for them to launch into the realm of impossibilities. It is the driving force and a tool used to unveil our innate skills. For example, the Father of Electricity, Michael Faraday encountered numerous challenges on his quest to invent electricity. He failed about ninety-nine times before he was able to make it at the one thousand time. If he were never faced with that challenge he wouldn't have know about ninety-nine possible ways to getting electricity done. It was in those challenges that he was able to discover how to make it better, and he discovered a way out.
Moreover, challenges create in us a thirst for knowledge on how to solve a particular problem. It helps us to use our innate abilities, thus without challenges nothing will help spur our inherent abilities to reality. So, it is the mother of invention. By seeking knowledge, e.g. through reading, researching; our innate abilities are sharpen to see solutions to problems in a better light and understanding.
Although the inherent abilities of a great leader are one of those imperative qualities that earns him his greatness. It can't be neglected for greatness to be holistic.
In conclusion, what makes a political leader great is the challenges that he is faced with and the manner in his he responded to it. His positive response to it makes him great. Also using his inherent abilities alongside to breakthrough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Any political leader at one time or the ...
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..., excellent communication skill etc. But of all the numerous abilities he pos...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...unch into the realm of impossibilities. It is the driving force and a tool used to...
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Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le to make it at the one thousand time. If he were never faced with that challenge...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...were never faced with that challenge he wouldnt have know about ninety-nine possible wa...
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Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ced with that challenge he wouldnt have know about ninety-nine possible ways to gett...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sharpened'.
Suggestion: sharpened
..., researching; our innate abilities are sharpen to see solutions to problems in a bette...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n a better light and understanding. Although the inherent abilities of a great leade...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lities that earns him his greatness. It cant be neglected for greatness to be holist...
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...lities that earns him his greatness. It cant be neglected for greatness to be holist...
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Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ositive response to it makes him great. Also using his inherent abilities alongside ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., if, moreover, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95882352941 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97506942142 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523529411765 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7673941222 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282218047918 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819004019749 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825413813019 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176109505779 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103698806519 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Any political leader at one time or the ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., excellent communication skill etc. But of all the numerous abilities he pos...
^^^^
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...unch into the realm of impossibilities. It is the driving force and a tool used to...
^^
Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le to make it at the one thousand time. If he were never faced with that challenge...
^^
Line 3, column 714, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...were never faced with that challenge he wouldnt have know about ninety-nine possible wa...
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Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ced with that challenge he wouldnt have know about ninety-nine possible ways to gett...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sharpened'.
Suggestion: sharpened
..., researching; our innate abilities are sharpen to see solutions to problems in a bette...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n a better light and understanding. Although the inherent abilities of a great leade...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lities that earns him his greatness. It cant be neglected for greatness to be holist...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...lities that earns him his greatness. It cant be neglected for greatness to be holist...
^^^^
Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ositive response to it makes him great. Also using his inherent abilities alongside ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., if, moreover, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95882352941 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97506942142 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523529411765 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7673941222 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282218047918 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819004019749 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825413813019 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176109505779 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103698806519 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.