Progress should be the aim of any great society. People too often cling unnecessarily to obsolete ways of thinking and acting because they enjoy feeling comfortable and fear the unknown.
Chasing greatness means striving for progress in a multitude of fields: science, politics, and laws are just a few of the areas that we, as a society, have to not only preserve but help flourish. The road to a great society does not leave any room for individual comfort zones or complacent behaviors, instead it is based on bolstering efforts to improve ourselves in each and every way possible.
There is no denying that we are situated at the peak of evolution, whether we are referring to a technological or a biological one. Every challenge that our ancestors have overcome has left us at top of the progress curve, enjoying life as we know it. We must not forget that it was progress that got our society to the one we know today. Hadn’t our ancestors fought for improvement, we might have lived in a world with no electricity, current water or heating devices, not to mention more complex technologies such as phones or television. Those who came before us could have settled at any point in history, but that would have changed the world we know forever.
A great society cannot be built over a generation, and we thus have to consider the world we live our children, and the children we live our world. There is a need to raise children in the spirit of work and effort, in order for them to fight for progress and avoid finding settling for less than we, as a society, deserve. To cling to certain ways out of fear of progress or for an apparent sense of comfort means to regress. For example, what if Thomas Edison would have never invented the telephone, because writing and sending letters was comfortable enough? People have struggled for us to benefit from the facilities and opportunities we have today, and we have to return this favor to the generations to come.
It could be argued that striving for progress has not always yield a positive outcome, and that a lot of inventions did more harm than good. However, without these harmful inventions or discoveries, other very vital ones could not have been developed either. The discovery of Uranium by Marie Curie has brought her and others to their deaths, but they allow us to undergo radiography today, an impressive medical tool that we could not do without.
Thus, progress is something we should all strive for, and never fear, for even when it seems the hardest to escape our comfort zone, we shall do it for the greater good.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k of evolution, whether we are referring to a technological or a biological one. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68705882353 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58341369075 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555294117647 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2902584823 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.5 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5625 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11852364658 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474230729266 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425160441103 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075873535805 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346620094045 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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