Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy

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Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy

humans by their nature are very curious creatures, if not for our curiosity, many things would be undiscovered until this current day. Thinking of it, many discoveries were achieved by pure curiosity: like the discovery of America by Christopher Columbus or the discovery of the concept of gravity by Sir Isaac Newton after that apple hit his head. To make a point, humans are always eager to occupy their minds with new information, even if it's as unbeneficial as the private lives of celebrities and public figures.

Therefore, when a person is carrying such a public form of lifestyle -where literally millions of people know about your existence- it's obvious that plenty of downsides will accompany it. even when you're not a famous person, your neighbours or co-workers would love to gain more insight of your private life, to compare it with theirs, or just to simply gossip about it with their friends. Somehow it feels as if gaining more knowledge of what others do in the privacy of their own home gives us some sort of high or delight.

As a result, nowadays, we see a lot of celebrity "reality shows" being aired in most of the notorious tv networks, where they show how those public personalities go on with their normal lives outside the boundaries of their profession. such shows have a humongous fanbase and get renewed for multiple seasons throughout the years, and if it wasn't for our natural curiosity as human beings - even if it's towards useless things - these type of tv shows would never exist.

The point being is that celebrities should indeed expect some sort of invasion of privacy when they seek such public roles, because what humans do the best is to seek information, regardless of it being actually valuable in content.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, therefore, sort of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92976588629 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66951739253 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622073578595 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.2767955244 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.777777778 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2222222222 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22927526775 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089435843012 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933220587802 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149833460553 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107641770246 0.0667264976115 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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