the real talent of an artist can only be assessed after the artists death because then their fame will not interfere in the assessment.
The issue here, if the real talent of a musician can be judged only after his death as his/her fame doesn't interfere in the assessment, is a controversial one. On one side, we have many musicians who have recieved their due privilege and reverence only after they died. Likewise, we had musicians who earned during their lifetime. I support the first viewpoint.
A main reason that I find that musicians cannot be accurately assessed even when they are alive is because great musicians make little difference in the lives of many people with their work. MOst people envy their work and thus try to caluminate their image in public so as to gain fame. We have the prefect example of Freddie Mercury from the "Queen" band. He, not only formed the badn "Queen" but was also part of many other collaborations besides the band. The ephemeral life he lived, has an everlasting effect on the people whom we worked with. People who went to their concerts really enjoyed them. Some of the tune like"we will rock you" are still famous and instill enthusiam in people. HIs compositions are now treated as masterpieces. But then, he had to face some problems, gliches with his own band members. They were jealous of the instant fame he got while the rest didn't get.
Also, apart from the fraternity of the musicians, the talent will also be judged by the poeple who listen them. Denizens are actually used to listen to a certain type of music and when a new genre is introduced, they are not that enthusiatic about it. and the prefect example to bolster this view is the venerated musician Mozart. He is probably the most celebrated musician of all time. He defied the traditions of creating symphonies and incorporated satire, humour and irony in them. People gave ambiguious reviews about the symphonies because they weren't used to listem to something like that. BUt over so many decades now, people love them and still go to to the operas to see watch his compositions. Mozart, himself, didn't recieve the lauding when he was alive.
On the contrary, we have had Michael Jackson. He was a legend in his time. His songs had earned so much respect when he was still alive. He was a personality whom people idolised. He inspired so many young aritst to pursue their dreams and become some like him. Though many musicians earned the respect and reverence after their death, Michael JAckson was probably the only one who had enjoyed it during his lifespan.
While there are arguments to be made for both sieds, it is clear that there are many musicians whohave received their due respect and appreciation only after they ceased to live. Thus, we can say that the real talent of the musicians cannot be accurately be assessed until the musicians has been dead for several generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, likewise, really, so, still, then, thus, while, apart from, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82987551867 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61105004584 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510373443983 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2782318562 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200553750315 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458542072925 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665482667955 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127688991784 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745459281418 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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