Requiring university students to take a variety of courses outside their major fields of study is the best way to ensure that students become truly educated.
It is necessary for a person to have knowledge regarding various issues and fields in this knowledge-driven world.The best way to gain knowledge is to have a knowledge regarding various other fields apart from the field in which one is doing his/her majors.If one also has the knowledge regarding various other fields then it can be utilized efficiently in routine life and in a pragmatic way.
The universities should encourage students to gain knowledge apart from their curriculum courses in order to encourage true learning and by doing so one can become truly educated.The universities should organize various programs related to other fields which are different from one's majors so that the students can participate in them and thus they can gain knowledge regarding the applications of subjects related to other fields.
People who have knowledge regarding other fields can identify the problems which can crop up in their fields by relating them to various other fields.Students with knowledge regarding other fields will be able to solve the problems in a much more practical way and thus they will be able to utilize that in their own majors.For example-If a student from computer background has the knowledge regarding the subjects related to electrical field then it can be of significant help in solving problems.
By studying various other courses one can correlate one's major field with the other fields.For example-If a student from civil engineering has the knowledge of mechanical field then it helps in correlating both the fields with each other and thus one can identify dependencies and independencies of both the fields.
By gaining knowledge relating to various other fields one can become erudite and thus it can be helpful from one's career prospective.For example- Students having more knowledge various fields will be more likely to quickly find solutions regarding the problems in their lives.
While having knowledge regarding other fields can be one of the ways of becoming truly educated ,there can be other ways too by which one can become truly educated.So the best way to become truly educated can be that other way also.One can also become truly educated by identifying common people's problems and then solving them with respect to their fields.
Thus,the knowledge regarding various courses other than the one's major field of study can be immensely helpful in gaining expertise regarding one's major field and it can also contribute significantly in making a person truly educated.The knowledge regarding other courses can thus be one of the best ways to become truly educated.It demonstrates one's aspect of thinking and it shows how much knowledge one can gain in one's life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232662192394 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.178970917226 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.131991051454 0.0880659088768 150% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0738255033557 0.0497285424764 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0402684563758 0.0444667217837 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10514541387 0.12292977631 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0805369127517 0.0406280797675 198% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.82001497064 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357941834452 0.030933414821 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0648769574944 0.0997080785238 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0559284116331 0.0249443105267 224% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0134228187919 0.0148568991511 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2724.0 2732.02544248 100% => OK
No of words: 437.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23340961098 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37528604119 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299771167048 0.280924506359 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221967963387 0.200843997647 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160183066362 0.132149295362 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82001497064 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 219.290929204 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.347826086957 0.48968727796 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.9624014257 55.4138127331 69% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6194690265 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 62.4285714286 23.380412469 267% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3800180362 59.4972553346 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 389.142857143 141.124799967 276% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.4285714286 23.380412469 267% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 0.674092028746 233% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.21349557522 364% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 92.4056881334 51.4728631049 180% => OK
Elegance: 1.42748091603 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303220270304 0.391690518653 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.346358540666 0.123202303941 281% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0627270569099 0.077325440228 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.09812430213e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20619965283 0.161403998019 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537028851804 0.0892212321368 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.401210872525 0.385218514788 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0578482167864 0.0692045440612 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20619965283 0.275328986314 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537028851804 0.0653680567796 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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