Requiring university students to take a variety of courses outside their major fields of study is the best way to ensure that students become truly educated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Every student should be aware of various academic disciplines in order to expand his vision and become truly educated. The prompt recommends that learning and researching more about different fields of study will definitely enlighten you. I strongly agree with this suggestion and support that one must not restrict themselves to only one field of study or else they will not be able to succeed in life.
Firstly, the majority of the major courses around the world conclude in just two years. Universities expect one to master their fields of study in such a short amount of time. For example, students studying medicine may not be able to acquire all the required knowledge to excel in the same. Colleges would need to provide more courses that not only improve their practical knowledge but also teach them more about the history of the origin of a virus and its cure.
Secondly, no one can predict the future and one should prepare for the worst. Due to various development in the autonomous industry, and our current society having any kind of job which is in great demand, for now, may be threatened. For instance, architectural jobs are in demand due to innovative and not-so-conventional ways of thinking about designing buildings. Any powerful AI may replace them while developing a design efficiently with no flaws in the architecture. Hence, every student should be aiming to diversify their knowledge and improve it daily.
Finally, every role in the current market requires the person to be equally efficient in multiple fields which in turn reduces the cost to the company by not hiring multiple graduates in a project avoiding any communication error between them. For example, any PCB developer may be required to have knowledge about Schematic design and embedded programming which may complete the designing and testing of the complete in one go and launch the product earlier.
Of course, some may argue that studying various courses may distract a student from their majors. However, this is the expected nature of anyone in the current scenario of a such competitive world. If we do so, we are likely to be more educated than others in their field. Furthermore, having knowledge about interdisciplinary subjects will never harm you in any way possible.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06100795756 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78250980467 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562334217507 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2414823655 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209114404726 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646901845158 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367142775027 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120533366242 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405751993414 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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