As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Knowledge is the key to growth. Every person is trying to be better than what they were a few years ago even a day ago. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this suggestion and argue that knowledge makes things more understandable than complex.
To begin with, the more awareness a person has regarding his study will definitely take him to great heights. Mastery in a field provides a great approach to any difficult and complex problem. For instance, in the recent pandemic of COVID-19, everyone had lost hope in curing corona and figured out new ways to work and travel safely but only our scientists and researchers all around the world were able to develop a vaccine that everyone thought was impossible to make. This was due to their mastery and proficiency in their field which gave them the confidence to develop not only one but multiple vaccines which are now manufactured locally and provided to everyone in the world. Hence, someone acquiring more knowledge will definitely give more faith in that person and everyone will rely on them for a better future.
Additionally, mysteries and complex situations are never-ending. They will get more complex and increase in number as our technology improved day by day. For example, flying was a dream for so many people that they could just dream and imagine that someday they would get supernatural powers to fly. Wright Brothers came up with a solution called an Aeroplane that is now been used by everyone to fly around the world. People plan world trips with their families, our leaders travel in private jets so that they could attend world press conferences on time. Therefore, one should never stop learning and aim for improving the society each day.
Of course, some argue that having more knowledge can lead to overconfidence and the destruction of self-worth. However, if this kind of mentality was embedded in our minds by our ancestors and current leaders then we would never have been able to get above the stone age or even reach it. Furthermore, attempting to restrict our knowledge will just be insulting and annoying.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'acquires'.
Suggestion: acquires
...o everyone in the world. Hence, someone acquiring more knowledge will definitely give mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92394366197 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63920362132 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8630966859 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.823529412 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174261420634 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588145249798 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542486443316 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102805725487 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317843093258 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.