Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Scandals are a most popular phenomenon in today’s world. Sometimes scandals are created to degrade one’s reputation and destroy one’s whole life. And, sometimes scandals are true enough. Scandals can able to bring some unique conditions and truth that can easily destroy one’s life. Some people are creating scandals only to destroy one’s reputation. So, it’s can’t possible that scandals are useful even if they focus our attention one problems.
Scandals can’t be useful in any condition. For example, if any scandal is made about any company and it’s highly advertised in the media and newspapers than it for sure grab the eyes of the nation but as well as it also denigrates the reputation of the company and the employees of the company which may have deleterious effect on the reputation of the company. Sometimes it may possible that the scandal published is wrong and it can’t possible for the company to get back that reputation.
Another example can be used to highlight the circumstance. If scandals are made about any person and it become viral than the reputation and the character of that person will be damaged forever. And now by the advance and revolutionary power of the technology, scandals are viral among all over the world. So, the reputation of that person is damaged permanently. And after sometimes if the person is proved free of guilty than it’s rarely possible that the reputation of that person is back. No one ever believe at the probity of that person. They will only remember about the scandal.
Another point that is pertinent to mention that scandals are not all time true. Sometimes scandals are created by some group of person to destroy one’s reputation. Moreover, some groups also created scandals in order to blackmail the others. People become frustrated when they see that scandals and in respect to save their reputation they can do anything like they will give the group a large amount of money and sometimes they even dared to finish their lives also. Sometimes, if the scandal that exposed will prove wrong but it can’t remove from the brain of the people and they started to treat that person very harshly and it may cause huge moral decrease of that person.
In conclusion, it can be stated that scandals are not useful in any condition even if it can able to draw the attention of the people. It has some harmful effects on human life and also to the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 469, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one problem', 'a problem', or simply 'problems'?
Suggestion: one problem; a problem; problems
...useful even if they focus our attention one problems. Scandals can't be useful in an...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...andals are made about any person and it become viral than the reputation and the chara...
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Line 7, column 468, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s they even dared to finish their lives also. Sometimes, if the scandal that exposed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00724637681 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62572830125 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425120772947 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 66.7605828714 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1304347826 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 5.13820224719 331% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117725922144 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455926302583 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360764039406 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752048700786 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00484028544717 0.0667264976115 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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