Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The work of the company is to produce product with best quality and characteristics. By using the labor force of the employees and the knowledge, skills and expertise of the employees the company produce their product by using which the customers will be more happy and satisfied. However, only making a product with tremendous quality and unique characteristics can not help the company to sell the product very well. In order to sell the product very well they have to aware the customers about the quality and characteristics of the product. So, the company give the responsibilities to advertise the product so that their product will be well known towards the customers and it will get more publicity and recognisation. But, some times the advertising firm will advertise the product with excessive criteria and qualities to attract more customers which is really not a good characteristic. It will give a false impression to the customers and thus the advertising company deceieve the customers.
In my point of view, most probably, most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. And, by doing so not only they damage the reputation and good name of the production company but also provide a false impression to the customers also. It is good that the production company can hire the advertising firm to advertise their goods so that people can know about the quality and characteristics of the product but they should not give any wrong conception to the customers also.
An example can be used to illustrate that issue. Once I saw an advertise of a hair oil where they provided information that by using the oil the customers will get ride off the hair fall problem within one week and they will also get smooth and strong hair. When I saw the advertisement, I was very excited because I was suffering from heavy hair fall problem and I started to think that it will definitely solve my problem. But when I bought that oil and used for one week and I did not get my desired result than I was got very frustrated and I felt cheated at the same time. After that I can not able to believe any concept of the advertisement because I thought that all the advertisement are based on false assumption.
Another important issue is some advertising company used well known artists and reputed celebrities to make their advertisement more believable and trustworthy. When I saw a advertise in which my favorite artist acting I thought that she is telling the truth and I bought that product but when using that product I did not get my desired result, I was very heartbroken that my favorite artist is doing the wrong thing and It was made me feeling more cheated and stopped to like that artist. But, I did not think that in the situation that may be the artist did not even know anything or it was only her duty. Without thinking anything I made a false conception about the artist and it will also damage her reputation.
In conclusion, I can only say that by advertise company sometimes do much to sell their product and they also deceive with their customers also to sell the product. It not only break the trust of the customers but also damage the reputation of the product and the company. So, advertising firms should think the fact that they should advertise the product but they should also take the point in their mind that over advertising can create some negative condition and damage the reputation and success of the product and the manufacturing company.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...rk of the company is to produce product with best quality and characteristics. By using t...
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Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ide a false impression to the customers also. It is good that the production company...
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Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e any wrong conception to the customers also. An example can be used to illustrate ...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ed to illustrate that issue. Once I saw an advertise of a hair oil where they provided infor...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... believable and trustworthy. When I saw a advertise in which my favorite artist a...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... believable and trustworthy. When I saw a advertise in which my favorite artist acting I th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, really, so, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 36.0 13.8261648746 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.0286738351 245% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2893.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 607.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76606260297 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96360453597 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77400633164 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.362438220758 0.524837075471 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 918.0 618.680645161 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.170719371 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5909090909 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199018626676 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773324384764 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838662063214 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131613805567 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726854467623 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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