TPO 17- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In fact, the way of advertising has turned into a controversial issue during recent decades which has forced managers of companies to recruit experts in order to design an effective advertisement which contribute product to spread in all four corners of the world. Some people if were asked would agree with the questioned statement; although, others have negative attitude toward this point of view. As far as my memory helps, I am in agreement with latter group because one cannot neglect the fact that some designer suggest methods which make commodities seem better than they really are; however, many policy makers has enacted legislation that mention the fact that such advertisements are illegal in country; besides, the experiments have proved the thought that there are some considerable different between the quality which are explained in television programs and the real world. However, in such a technological world, companies prefer to woo the attention of buyer in long-term instead of cajoling them.
Actually, selling the products is counted as the most vital aim of companies because the revival extremely depends on the amount of profits that has been gained; therefore, they try to increase the rate of sales by advertising.
Although the quality is an effective factor which stands first among others feature which cause a product or service to be purchased, improvement of quality is so expensive that managers prefer to use it just as an advertising attribute; in other words, they defect people by introduce the product as a high-quality devise. Albeit covering the truth not only doesn't contribute the factories to become more successful but they also lose their position in society.
Indeed, it is hard to ignore the fact that in modern era people have been aware enough that they don't trust the companied commercial programs; furthermore, the knowledge of people has grown that distinct the real or false advertisement by using famous applications where people have written comment about almost all products; hence, companied have been inclined to limit or even omit untruthful ads.
All in all, although the number of untrustworthy advertisements have been relatively decreased because of the negative effects that companied have encountered, there are some generators who rather exploit from them. Undeniably, not only do the governments will forbid the false ads, but the managers will decide to spend money in more practical ways instead of fake commercials. In conclusion as mentioned above, we see such advertisement yet as well as past
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, as for, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31707317073 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83643331598 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.998190001 48.9658058833 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.181818182 100.406767564 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2727272727 20.6045352989 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 5.45110844103 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131476495347 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454877957635 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336799750814 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650096985774 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374183112709 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 11.7677419355 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.1575268817 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.01818996416 126% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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