TPO 49. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
In fact, having appropriate friends has turned into an essential issue during recent decades among people whether older or young which encouraged many companies to design some websites in order to help people to find friends easily. Although a vast majority of people disagree with the thought that to be more cheerful, people should have some limited friends over a long period instead of communicating with a large number of new friends, I extremely reinforce the mentioned idea because not only does deep friendship cause people to be more convenient in their communication but such friends help each other in making decisions. The reasons to validate my perspectives are explained hereunder.
First of all, undeniably, a long-term friendship contributes people to be more intimate that causes them to share even negative events in order to be more relax. In other words, some friends can be counted as a member of a family who not only supports you in bad circumstances but also becomes happy along with you when you gain a prosperous. Moreover, you can easily trust her to say the secrets. generally, I belives the statement that, the more intimacy, the more happiness.
Actually, a friend who identifies the person complete enough that can distinguish the best way for her probably has known her more than 5 years that undoubtedly makes the person both happy and successful. it is hard to ignore the fact that friends influence our decisions directly, thus, having a long period of friends who have recognized our behaviors and abilities, will guide us to select the efficient approaches in the life. For instance, I wanted to change my field in university. Although my family dissuaded me, one of my best friend who we had spent the most of time with each other, strongly couraged me to register in an art major because she was aware of my ability in artworks.
In conclusion, one cannot neglect the fact that having restricted strong relationship is much more crucial in comparison with having a wide range of interaction with new friends who not only cannot we be comfortable enough to share our feeling with them but also they even can't be an effective people in our life because they don't know the details of our lives or our preferences.
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- Question: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they change the specific arguments presented in the reading passage.making sever rules for recycling of coal ash. 86
- Essay topics: TOEFL TPO 40 - Integrated Writing Task 90
- educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking web sites has been updated. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 410, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ng period instead of communicating with a large number of new friends, I extremely reinforce the ...
Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...omes happy along with you when you gain a prosperous. Moreover, you can easily trust her to ...
Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...an easily trust her to say the secrets. generally, I belives the statement that, the more...
Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...s the person both happy and successful. it is hard to ignore the fact that friends...
Line 13, column 274, Rule ID: CANT
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ur feeling with them but also they even cant be an effective people in our life beca...
Line 13, column 327, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...fective people in our life because they dont know the details of our lives or our pr...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94488188976 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7278133273 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.952035433 48.9658058833 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.0 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295810877538 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919652734351 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613531430666 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169187479513 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489445573403 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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