Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people provide a strong opinion about whether television commercial would make a product seems much better than the reality or not. Therefore, it is a subject of intense debate in the recent world. As far as I am concerned, I genuinely believe that most of the ads typically create a product way better than they are in real. To elaborate more on this topic, the following reasons and explanations will be presented.
First and foremost conspicuous reason to justify my viewpoint is, all the TV commercials aim to instantly attract a large group of customers and since the TV is the best medium to present their product, thus the advertisement company would do there best to make people believe them. What I mean is ad company would fake it to make it so real that people would undoubtedly believe them. For typical instance, fast food restaurants like Mac Donald's or Burger king never leaves a chance to showcase their special meal or burger thus giving them a fancy name even with minor changes in their ingredient. This creates temptation among people to taste the newly launched meal or burger. Hence, this example illustrates how the promotion of a new meal through TV would attract people even if the meal is simply the same with just a mere change.
The second reason to substantiate and indicate my viewpoint is television advertisement specially promoted by renowned people like famous movie actress or athletic would often make people believe that the product would be fair as it implies in the ad. My life experience set a compelling example of what I mean. When I was a sophomore, I saw my favorite actress energetically promoting a beauty cream and I genuinely felt that the actress would have used it too. As a result, I purchased the cream, but to my disappointment, the cream was not as good as I expected and definitely not worth the price.
In conclusion, because of the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that most ads make it believe that the products are much better than they are in reality.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, i mean, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72655675461 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549857549858 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5664109934 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183018016498 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646670950557 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690511478262 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142894712732 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800241958509 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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