Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The Internet plays a huge role in this 24th century and everything seems impossible without access to the internet. I strongly believe that it can provide the world with immense valuable information. To elaborate more on this topic mentioned above, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, these days people are dependent on the internet for various activities irrespective of its importance. In other words, the advent of the internet has helped millions of people and it has become an indispensable part of our modern world. Taking my life experience as an example, I prefer to study most of the time in the public library and it takes me an hour to reach. Therefore, I always check the library timings on its website before I leave home so that I could reach there on time. Not just the timings, its website helps me offer a lot of information. Lately, I saw a notice about English conversation and interactive class on library website, therefore I joined this class and it really helped me improve my speaking. So, I believe that if such information were not on its website, then I wouldn't have known about it. This example demonstrates how the crucial role that the internet plays in our daily life.
Aside from the point I quoted above, the internet can also provide an up to date and the latest news on whatever happening around our world. What I mean is it helps us informing various news and providing important information. For instance, I live in New York City, but I came from another country, hence, I get the latest news from watching YouTube and Facebook. I feel extremely happy getting to know all the up to date news of my country.
In addition to this, the internet helps us in staying connected with various people around the world. Before the advent of it, it was really difficult to get connected but due to various calling apps, it has helped tremendously. For me, I am always connected to my friends and family members through the internet.
In conclusion, because of the reasons stated above, I genuinely feel that internet can give people with a lot of valuable information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81351351351 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69138169484 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52972972973 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2300221288 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7368421053 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188427812539 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635640276308 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645363494698 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127993956838 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719763461813 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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