Employee should work four days with less amount of money or five days.

Essay topics:

Employee should work four days with less amount of money or five days.

The reading passage states that in a company some workers prefer to work for four days instead of five days and they also don;t have any problem if they are paid less because they thought that it will hel them and the company also to achieve success and prosperity. But the lecture states that completely different and inaccurate in order to the reading passage.
First, the reading passage states that if the workers can get four day work load, they will get more rest and they will be more rlaxed and they can give their best for the betterment of the company and thus the company can achieve more profit and success. But the lectures states that it may be possible that the company can tell the employee to work overtime to make up the loss. And it can be possible that the company will except more from the employees during their four days work period. Then, it can be possible that the employees become more overloaded and frustrated witk their over work pressure.
Second, the reading passage states that by favoring four hour work load, it will reduce unemployment rate and more people will get the opportunity to work in the company because the people who prefer four hour working schedule will pay less than the people who prefer five hour work schedule and in this amount they can able to afford some more employee. But, the lecture states that if they will hire more employee, they will have to train the new employee and for arranging the training sessions, they have to pay more money. Moreover, if the number of employees are increased than they will need more office space and more computer. So, the company has to pay more money and it will hamper the progress of the company.
Third, the reading passage states that the employees who will work for four days will able to improve their quality of living. They can spend more time with their families, friends and thus they can able to get plethora of hapiness in their life. However, the lecture states that it may be possible that the company will prefer those people who like to work for five days than the people who like to work for four days. And, in time of promotion or any other benefit they will prefer the employees who work for five days because they may think that they will be more dedicated to their company and work hard for the success of the company. And, thus the employee who work for four days can not get the opportunity to get the promotion and benefits and it will hamper their success and career. It will definitely a negative point in their carrer. In these ways the lecture differs the reading passage.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, third, thus, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 32.0 5.04856512141 634% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 7.30242825607 315% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 22.412803532 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1373.03311258 155% => OK
No of words: 466.0 270.72406181 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57510729614 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0967455259 2.5805825403 81% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.339055793991 0.540411800872 63% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 419.366225166 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4220239527 49.2860985944 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.411764706 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4117647059 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06452816374 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233838384898 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932755792585 0.0996497079465 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669080282197 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159146345663 0.162205337803 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266099780911 0.0443174109184 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.42419426049 82% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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