People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People are constituting lots of characteristics symptoms. Among all the creatures, only human have the tremendous power to make decision for themselves and for the betterment of the society and the whole nation. And, however, this distinctive quality make the human most illustrious and unique creature among all the creation of the almighty. Furthermore, in the whole lifetime the people always face some critical condition where he/she have to take a most critical decision. Sometimes, they take the decision on the basis of emotional gesture and in some condition, they have to take the decision on the basis of logic. Moreover, this a great condition for human to take the right and scrupulous decision in the right moment.
It is pertinent to point out that all the time people cannot take decisions on the basis of their logic. In some cases, it is important to take the decision on the basis of emotion. If people fail to take the right choice at the right time, it may bring some pernicious condition in the life of that people. In the above issue it is tried to state that some people make decisions base on emotion and then justify those decisions with logic and thus afterwards they are proved as poor decision makers. This circumstance is quite reliable. If any person make decisions on the basis of emotional values than they should not judge the decisions with logical values. Emotionally taking decisions are beyond logic. Logic only focus on the benign side and deleterious side of the conclusions. But, emotions never deal with benign sides or harmful sides, it only deals with feelings and thoughts of the other people.
An example is used to make the circumstance more unambiguous. Like, sometimes children do something extremely harmful thing like taking drugs, initiating smoking habits or cheating in the exams and so on. In these circumstances, logic delineates that parents should be extreme strict on these cases and they should strongly admonish their children. But, however, in some cases the parents took the path of emotion and they tried to understand their children mental condition and choose not to admonish them but to realize them their faults. And in this particular case, they should never compare their decisions with logic because these decision is totally based on emotion.
Another important issue is, it is not true that emotionally taking decisions are always right and it will create some successful events. But, however in some circumstances it is necessary to take decisions on the basis of emotion. For examples, if the teachers always very strict with the students, the students never become free with their teachers and cannot able to share the problems with them. But, if they are free and amiable enough with the students in some circumstances then they become free with them and can easily share their problems with them and it will be very useful for their development.
In conclusions, in some condition people should take decision on the basis of emotion and they should never compare these decisions with logical values. Being logical in every decision is sometimes not create any good results. Sometimes emotional decisions can also create some great success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 439, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ce some critical condition where he/she have to take a most critical decision. Somet...
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Line 2, column 538, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s. This circumstance is quite reliable. If any person make decisions on the basis ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2689.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0545112782 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58617312884 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406015037594 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 851.4 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0522330601 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5925925926 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7037037037 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295827622147 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103006982765 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949636184325 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193928075667 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834246518551 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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