The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Society is a paramount part of a nation. The prosperity and success of a nation is critically dependent on the culture and scruples of the nation. The people who are living in the society are the main source of energy and enthusiasm of the society. Without any doubt, it is the fast and foremost duty of the society to build up the character and the mind of the people who live in the society in a scrupulous, prudent and docile manner.
The above issue is tried to explain that the well -being a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority. But it is quite a contradictory issue and it's can't be accurate in all circumstances. In order to occur all the work in the society in a well mannered and disciplined way, the people of the society selected some authority by a legal and cogent way. It is the cardinal duty of the elected authority to take some cogent and scrupulous decision so that the society can move in a well-mannered way and can able to achieve lots of progress and prosperity. But there may be possible that some people don't like the rules and regulations that proposed by the authority and they denied to accept the following rules and regulations. Sometimes it may possible that they can create any belligerent condition which is a huge conundrum for the society.
For example, if the authority tried to control the population growth of the society and they proposed a law which stated that 'no family can't have more than two children'. In the perspective of the whole world now every country's main motive is to control the population growth. However, if the people of the society are not agreed with the decision of the authority and they are become more bellicose and created some conundrum than the other people of the society can face lots of major difficulties.
Another example is used to explain the issue in a more detailed way. Now the environmental pollution is a grabbag in today's world. Scientists and authorities main focus is now to reduce the most important issue. For that reason, the authority of the society banned the use of polybag which contained chemicals like polyethelene and poleoxalate. And, they also banned the use of some toxic chemicals like azulene, pyrole, saccaride in the textile and chemical industries. It's a quite benign decision for the prosper of the nation and the society. But, the owner of the textile and chemical factories may find the decision illegal and they can start to protest against the decision which can create a massive situation in the society.
In conclusion, it can be asserted that the authority of the society have to be chosen in a well- educated and logical manner so that they can able to take good and accurate decisions in favor of the society and it's better not to question about the decision of the authority because it can create a huge mass.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... is quite a contradictory issue and its cant be accurate in all circumstances. In or...
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Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a well-mannered way" with adverb for "well-mannered"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s decision so that the society can move in a well-mannered way and can able to achieve lots of progres...
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Line 2, column 616, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... there may be possible that some people dont like the rules and regulations that pro...
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Line 2, column 692, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied accepting'.
Suggestion: denied accepting
...that proposed by the authority and they denied to accept the following rules and regulations. So...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...posed a law which stated that no family cant have more than two children. In the per...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...odays world. Scientists and authorities main focus is now to reduce the most important iss...
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Line 4, column 471, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...in the textile and chemical industries. Its a quite benign decision for the prosper...
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Line 4, column 503, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...stries. Its a quite benign decision for the prosper of the nation and the society. But, the...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rity because it can create a huge mass.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 500.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.702 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65948792063 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.9 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6966565959 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.952380952 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8095238095 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194127389139 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639155920266 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706050744906 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111549930135 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458380556715 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.