The fact that scandals are useful or not is an interesting topic to discuss as there are equal advantages as well as disadvantages. With the growth of technology, media is gain more strength than it had ever been in the history. So the actions of media need to be properly channeled, they have a hawk eye on the whole society always on the lookout for mistakes and scandals. In few ways scandals that are brought to light have more benefits.
Today there are more smartphone than humans in the world, this provides feasibility or ease of accessing information and news. Although this makes easy information exchange this also leads to propagation of fake news, useless ideas and groundless beliefs. Another backlog of modern media is that many news channels, news papers and websites are owned by the wealthy or politicians leading apathy in information. They use there power to delude the mass over baseless scandals to cover up important issue. Also nowadays there is a lack of professionalism therefore the news are bribed to close an issue or promote their image. At times when a honest person or celebrity is targeted as in the case of Michael Jackson, this may ruin their life permanently. Does that means scandals are of no good?
The answer is no, there numeral benefits of scandals too. Because them many criminals who hide under political and financial power come under the spotlight and justice will be served. People like Vadra who has high political influence was arrested when his scandal was known to public, no matter how power a person is they will be brought to justice. A similar case happened with the American president Richard Nixon, When his scandals were revealed there was protest and he had to resign.
Another benefits of scandals is that in an indirect manner it provides a hope to people that criminals and lawbreakers are brought to justice and no one is above the law. It helps people gain more information on what exactly is happening around the globe and gain additional information.There are people who work with zeal in today's world making sure everyone is doing their work in a proper manner and also in converse the officials, politicians or any one for that matter fear media and avoid making committing crimes.
To sum, i have agree that scandals are useful and necessary in this world to bring people of high authority to work under the law. Concluding from the above three paragraphs even though there are few disadvantages but the benefits overpower them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89201877934 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64884443129 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7088598137 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.684210526 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117307715522 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405462319066 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327610722535 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066250692325 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329383402514 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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