Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement exerts that scandals are able to focus the population’s attention in a better way when compared with the traditional speakers or reformers. Although this may be true, there is a lack of complementary information to support this idea.
In the first place, a scandal is the result of an illicit practice that is discovered by police, for example. So, that type of information is very easy to be diffused by the media, really giving a lot of attention from the general public and it is very important that the society give attention to this type of problem, creating an atmosphere of pressure on the people that are involved.
However, speakers or reformers have an important job flagging scandals before they happen. A reliable font of information ought pass to their listeners the society problems to curb illicits actions. A good engagement is vital to discover political or economical problems, a media that is always talking about a politic’s actions or showing how an company pay their taxes could have less attention from the audience related to that problem, but can minimize the scandals.
A good example how this works is the car accidents prevent actions. The conductor’s will give a small attention to this type of diffusion, however it could help to minimize the car’s crashes. When an accident occurs, there will be a lot of focus on the event, but it could be worst without the prevent problem. In that example, the speaker or reformer is the prevent action, who works like a hidden character that can minimize a bigger problem, which is the accident, or in the context, a scandal.
Furthermore, the highest focus of the public in scandals is also important. When this prevent actions don’t reach all the society, because of numerous factors, like the media speaker restrict public, a scandal will show to all type of people what is happening. Even the most disinterested people will take some minutes to try understand the problem and is in that moment that the speaker or reformer need to be able to pass a summary of the problem for this type of people.
In conclusion, it is possible to say that sandals are useful to show people a problem, however the speaker or reformer have also a very important hole in a way to curb scandals to happen. At the same time, if a scandal event occurs, the speaker or reformer have to be able to show to the public the reasons that triggered the event and how the society can avoid further problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ally giving a lot of attention from the general public and it is very important that the socie...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: OUGHT_SAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ought to pass'?
Suggestion: ought to pass
... happen. A reliable font of information ought pass to their listeners the society problems...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ement is vital to discover political or economical problems, a media that is always talkin...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
...cover political or economical problems, a media that is always talking about a politic&...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...a politic's actions or showing how an company pay their taxes could have less...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...roblem, but can minimize the scandals. A good example how this works is the car ...
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Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he event, but it could be worst without the prevent problem. In that example, the speaker o...
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Line 4, column 365, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hat example, the speaker or reformer is the prevent action, who works like a hidden charact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, for example, in conclusion, talking about, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82710280374 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78493696077 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448598130841 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0785650588 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.125 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206782781504 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742897253192 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431755401003 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11441818486 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287825417873 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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