Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The quality of life is a very important part of our lives. It is what makes possible to us to have a good and comfortable life, without complaining about trivial problems. Some people would believe that the live when our grandparents were children were easier; other would disagree. In my view, the today's life is more comfortable for two important reasons.
The main reason is that nowadays it is easier to find all sort of products. When we go to a supermarket we could find any product that we want, even the most exotic ones from overseas countries. This aspect is very new for the society that probably started on our parents generation. In that way, we could imagine how hard was to find and purchase basic products on our grandparents time. For example, I remember a story that my grandfather told to me when I was young. He and family lived on a small farm located in Brazil. They had a very simple life, planting and trading with neighbors all the food they need. On time at the christmas evening, he and my grandmother decided to give a gift to my dad, a Coke bottle. He told me that on the day before he took a bus to travel three hundred kilometers to go to Sao Paulo, the biggest city on the state. It was an entire day journey to just find a Coke bottle on that time and today we can find one in virtually any store that we go. This event clearly demonstrated that the life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children.
Another reason is that today we have electricity. It could sound strange to us to live without electricity. We all know that the light bulb was discovered by Thomas Edison on the 1800s, but just on the first years of the twenty century that in fact they started to be used. For instance, my grandfather also always told me a story explaining how they stored meal without a fridge. When they killed a cow, for example, it was a lot of meat that could last for months, so they need to conserve that, indeed there were two different methods available on that time. The first one was to use a lot of salt. This method helps to delay the meat decomposing, but when they want to eat, it was necessary an entire day to remove the salt leaving the meat inside a big reservoir of water. Another method was to use pork fat. This fat could also conserve the meal and it was easier to remove, but it was useful for less time when compared to salt. Today, we used a fridge and we do not even think about how easy is to conserve meat in our time. This experience taught me that life is very much easier today when compared with our grandparents time.
In sum, though some may believe before the life was easier, today we have a very easy and comfortable quality of life. Not only we can easily find any product that we want but also we have electricity to help in our daily tasks. Everyone should try to live for one day without a supermarket and electricity to see how difficult it will be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...; other would disagree. In my view, the todays life is more comfortable for two import...
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Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...bors all the food they need. On time at the christmas evening, he and my grandmother decided ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, sort of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 552.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36594202899 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41620489689 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44384057971 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6708533624 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1034482759 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0344827586 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.20689655172 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202425399052 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649596594093 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745976709861 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14322063148 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477502238247 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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