Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Plethora of things happening in the nation and around the world which are tainted and fallacious but rarely caught the attention of the World's denizen. Scandals on the other hand lift the lid of the scams that were subtly hidden. It also makes people aware and prevent the issues from happening in future.
Fast-food is considered as the most accessible means cure the hunger in varied nations, especially for the kids and teens who love the taste of the crunch and the sweetness present in it. Also, the adults have fast food like burgers, noodles and ready-to-made food to escape from the hardwork of making the real food in the kitchen. On the top of that most fast food are pocket- friendly. But recent research on them on the content of trans fat and the preservatives shows its unhealthy nature and detrimental effects on the human organs. In 2008, the recent on Sugar and its ill-effect shocked the world as its presence is ubiquitous in the fast food. For instance, the bowl of cereals contain 4 grams of sugar present before we even add milk and added sugar . Even the potato baked chips contains sucroce which is absent when it is made at home. Had these research were n ot made to public, most of us would be blindly feeding our kids and ourself with the even safest option of baked fast food.
Facebook started as the social networking website that enable us to take a peek-in into our freinds life. But all this was happening with their consent as they are the one who are posting photos on the wall, updating status and sharing locations of their places. However, recent scandal on the privacy theft of the facebook, made people aware of the way this billion dollar company was making money through advertisement crafted for specific individuals by taking the access to our device cookies, interest, photos, geo-location and also from the contacts on our phone. Such a scandal was awakening to uas as now we have the privilege of selecting the option of the cookies we want to keep.
In 2010, the prestigious Common Wealth Games were organized by the India to which they collected funds from various nations and Private organization all across the globe. After the successful completion of the event, the vicious scandal came into light about the amount of corruption done by the CEO of CWG event. According to the report 40 percent of the fund received were taken out by his entourage and dissuaded the government. This particularly raise concern to other government official and till now, after 8 years of CWG none of the similar scandal is caught.
Therefore, I agree with the statement and the authors idea that scandal are useful and they focus the attention of the public on the problems that were not visible before, also warn the government and the general citizens about their outcomes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 487.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79671457906 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44341705103 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556468172485 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6613624969 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.35 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122056677102 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303401801169 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455478016852 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809486588616 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066024082395 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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