Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Innovation in technology is termed as application in scientific work and it's further development. Technology has matured from the past in significant ways. From evolution of camera in our cell phones to the vehicles not depending upon the gasoline, exemplifies that upgradation in technology is the benefit to the society. I believe that stymie the scientific research in today's could be detrimental to our generation.
Earlier 100 percent of the electricity was dependent on the coal and hydro-power project but from last decade, it is possible to produce the electricity from Nuclear and Wind Energy. For instance, 40 percent electric power in Copenhagen comes from wind turbines installed along the sea-side fields of Denmark and the nuclear power station situated at the downtown to the capital city. Consequently, conserving the convectional power source which are non-renewable and are at the verge of its extinction from being over-used. This result has been made possible and further established by decades of scientific reseach by the geologist from all over the Europe. It have also been the show-case to the world that our society can depend on renewable resource for the production of electricity which can reach to our homes and offices conveniently in the future. Therefore, scientific research holds the green future for upcoming generation.
Before 21th century, there was no hint of natural gases and the electric powered vehicles that we use for our everyday variety of work. But since 2006, there was a significant development and increase in the use of natural powered moter vehicles, such and buses and tramps in major cities like Sydney, Singapore, And Kuala-lumpo, that cause the reduction of harmful carbon monoxide in the atmosphere. It is also seen that the development of electric cars and motorcycles from various brands like Tesla, Tata, Audi and Mercedes, bolsters the concept of green and clean environment. This innovation is made possible due to the years of research and development that is annually regulated under the government of different countries. Therefore, it is imperative to say that impending these research by the government can serve hazardous to the future.
It is true that the government endorsing these research and development keep aside a hefty budget that comes from the pocket of the tax-payers, we must not forget the importance of same as it helps to create clean environment for now and years to come. Also I agree that some developing countries have more important projects to fulfil for their denizens such as abolition of poverty and 24/7 supply of electricity & water to the society therefore, it seems rudimentary for them to take care of the basic needs before having a thought for future research and development as the research patents from can be bought, sold and used by different countries.
In conclusion, due to the reasons and the examples discussed above it is clear that it depends upon the country to country whether they should promote or restrict the scientific research & development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2583.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23935091278 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90789116675 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507099391481 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 814.5 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.354784297 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3888888889 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122321768653 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410228764119 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381939815935 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782096558322 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377659359078 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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