Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
It is often said that actions speak louder than words. Humans are intelligent creatures who often get what they want by speaking things and influencing the people from whom they want something. It is thus often very difficult to find the true intention of people just through their words, Actions, on the other hand, display the true character and intention of a person. Through similar arguments, it can be said that scandals are more useful to focus our attention on problems that no speaker ever could. I strongly agree with the given statement.
Scandals often bring out deep rooted problems in our society and connect to the general population than a speaker ever could. They are also not biased in favoring one side, humans on the other hand often have hidden agendas. Even if in some situations they might not, some kind of hidden prospect can always be linked to them which might bring their credibility into question. As an example, recently a highly meritorious student from IIT Madras, a very prestigious institution in India committed suicide. The reason that initially came out was that the student was able to secure the top spot in every subject barring one. This seems like a very trivial reason to end one's life. subsequently, the student's suicide letter came to light in which she accused the professor of the subject which she was not able to top, off bigotry and islamophobia. It came to light that the professor used to harass the girl child because she was a muslim. the case brought about a huge public uproar followed by the termination of the professor. There had been complaints about the said professor multiple times before, but unfortunately, they landed on deaf ears. It cost the life of a bright student to bring a deep rooted social issue to public light.
On another note, in the US. there have been talks of data theft and privacy for years now. There were no tight regulations concerning the privacy of public data which could be exploited by large companies and governmental agencies. It was only after the whistleblower from the NSA disclosed documentation that the government was spying on its people that it caught public attention. Recently in a huge data scandal, Facebook was prosecuted by congress for leaking public data, after which tight laws were implemented concerning the use and sale of public data.
There are countless other instances where huge scandals served to bring people together and pushed the reforms for better policies, one can look at high profile rape cases in the last decade in India, You don't even have to look that far. In a recent rape case, the victim- a doctor, while traveling home had some issues with her two wheeler. Two men approached to help her. The men abducted her and raped her under a nearby deserted bridge, the men also burnt her victim alive after the rape. The parents of the victim tried to file a police complain, but the police kept hassling them on whose jurisdiction the crime was committed. Scandals like these bring to light the deep rooted problems to public light. The rape and murder as bad as it was, brought to light the inefficiency and lack of empathy of the legal system. The general people were able to relate to the case which is why it generated a huge uproar. Speakers or reformers might be able to persuade some small sections of the society together who in some way have been burdened by the problem, but they will often fail to gain the interest of general people. Scandals like these could happen to anyone and thus can better unify the people against certain societal problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2984.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 620.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81290322581 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98996985923 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44917323433 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 315.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508064516129 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 925.2 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5734476097 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2580645161 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06451612903 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217194056633 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474512948805 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965336435661 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124911227813 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628540676877 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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