Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Scandals actually play a significant role in addressing issues that might have been overlooked by a body of people or a society as a whole. It is true that people learn from their mistakes, but if corrective measures are not taken on time, it might lead to the downfall of the system on which further progress can be made. I believe that scandals often bring out issues that might affect a larger section of the society which can be rectified and improvised in the long run.
The chief reason for my view is that society, however pragmatic it is, does not pay attention to the issue until it is highlighted. Taking an example of a German-based multinational conglomerate, Seimens AG, was involved in bribery, corruption, and money laundering scandal. Siemens was accused to bribe state government officials of multiple countries in order to win state contracts. It became an international issue when it came to the spotlight of media. In this arraignment, the company was fined and took corrective measures by formulating anti-corruption policies. Hence, scandals might bring into focus the key issues by acknowledging and putting efforts into solving them.
Another reason for my view is that scams come in different disguises, and it is important for us to be aware of the type of fraud that can happen with us or with the society. For instance, a recent global cyber scandal was revealed where the imposters were transferring money from people’s accounts by asking them their bank related information pretending to be bank employees. Therefore, it is important that these scandals are revealed for the public to become careful and informed about the kind of denigrated affairs.
However, some might argue that divulging these scandals publically might abet people in committing such heinous crimes. Yet it is important for the people and the society to be aware of such acts and act accordingly. However, in the final analysis, it is better to make an informed move for the better good of the people.
In sum, because illuminating the issues and solving them, and being informed and careful of the scandals that overshadow our society, it is better we identify and rectify them beforehand than to be ignorant. These scandals are revolutionary and attend to the problems that no speaker or reformer could ever tackle with such finesse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04627249357 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84744494553 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54498714653 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5417711402 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.470588235 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134187881874 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427063742257 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531511864989 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814119921806 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654616566091 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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