Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other area-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."
The statement claims that scandals in politics and academia are important and useful which i partially agree with as on revelations of
scandals the truth about the malicious content in the organization is highlighted and further actions can taken on those who try to
confuse people about the working of the structure while the above statement is certainly harmful to the organization or reputation of the
body and can create chaos in public order.
Firstly, The scandals when disclosed helps in seeking attention of people as people can now clearly see the usage of funds and resources
by the higher authorities. when taking into account political scandals of various political parties which involves money laundering. And
favours done by official at higher position. A recent scandal of money laundering came from Pakistan prime minister who was involved in
land deals which caused controversy and finally resignation from the post of prime minister because of the outburst it gain attention from
various classes of society and finally the huge rebellion against the prime minister.
Secondly, In academics A chancellor was expelled from a well-known university because of misusing funds provided to him for construction of
soccer field in which he got a cut from the developer and was caught in the deal. but does the news serve an useful purpose . it does more harm than
favours. In catching the culprit the reputation of the university was came down. further charges where placed on the university for misusing and eventually
it had deleterious effects on the academics of students.
Thirdly,The statement also correctly identifies combining of people for a common cause. In recent lights of facebook's selling its users data into
cambridge analytica found so much media attention which many speakers and technical giants where already warning. but due to disclosure it grab most attention
which no one could grab or bring to light. because of only scandals facebook has decided to bring new amendments and implementations in use. Thus scandals serves
as a benefit in finding flaws of structure and encouraging new structure.
The claim that the statement makes about speaker and reformer has loopholes in it. many reformers obtained the attention masses of people with
their persuasive skills and orator skill. Martin Luther King was such person who bound the entire nation without concentrating on any scandals.
he coherented various people from all background for his fight. Another example is Mahatma Gandhi, he fought for independence of India while bringing
in millions of people for his fight against Britishers. such persons makes sure scandals are not necessary to bring in public interest.
In conclusion we can say that scandals have quite a few benefits and some harmful effects on the organization as well but the disclosure that scandal brings
ultimately helps in the long run and is most of the time useful to public. They eventually help in bringing people close than speaker or reformer could.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2604.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35802469136 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75541576315 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 785.7 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.2593316408 60.3974514979 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.217391304 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1304347826 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.97078651685 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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