Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests,however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem.
am agree with the claimed statement that scholar and researcher should not concern with whether their work makes contribution to the larger societies.They should give more preference on pursue of their individual interests but it may happen that their interests are uncommon and idiosyncratic.
In every work personal interest is very important to confirm the fruitful output.If someone has interests then he would give more time and provide more effort to make it success.As example every universities have different research area for students.If a student select his or her preferences topic then it might have chance to be fruitful.In preference topic students gives more time and efforts to know the topic and also take advice from seniors to make it countable.It might have chance that after hard working and diligently working researcher pursue their goal.
Every research topic is different with respect to different individuals interests. But even if these interests are uncommon and idiosyncratic they should give preference to pursue their goal. Researcher try different experiments in labs to find out the appropriate results. Sometimes their collected sample results are really divergent from actual theories which is unusual behavior .But these unusual behavior of the experiments results helps us to know vastly about the research area.
Furthermore, researcher should not concern with whether their results bring contribution for mass communities. We can not say about research output without proper execution and how long the contribution sustain. As example researcher make plastic materials for out daily usage and it is now used by whole world . But now these plastic become issues of environmental pollution. Sometimes these plastic material raise serious health issues by burning these material as it can not be composed.So no matter whether we concern for mass communities for contribution.
Moreover, every researcher have right to give preference on their personal interests and should not concern whether their research results would contribute to mass communities. However researcher are free to research to pursue their goal but always they should keep in mind that they can not exceeds their limitations against the countries Some scientists make different type of research in labs as example make virus which may effect human body badly if human are anyhow come to contact with that virus. As it is a securities issues of human life then the researcher might get punished.
Finally, from the above constructive discussions now we can come to draw main point that is researcher should not concern whether their work bring contribution to mass communities and give preference on their personal interests .By hard working and diligently working they can bring success. Moreover researcher should keep in mind that they have some limitations over working their individuals interests.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2472.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50556792873 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83451739964 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449888641425 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 752.4 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.618611222 60.3974514979 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.5 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0625 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484280942558 0.243740707755 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168765348422 0.0831039109588 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138181645459 0.0758088955206 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28987366934 0.150359130593 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135236831006 0.0667264976115 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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