Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Science has been a boon to the mankind from its start. It has provided a lot of angels in the prespective of a society. Besides, technoogy is the best commercial and development use of science. Proper use of both which are complementry to each other will lead a society towards a better future. The word 'Proper' stands as the point of where science and technology is used only for good deeds, not for any vengence agenda. The prospect of science and technology will lead to prosperity only when it is used by society for a development purpose. The use may solve all of society problems described by below three reasons.
Firstly, mordern day society fights mostly with hunger problems. With around 700 billion people and no rate of population decline yet to seen, food will be the main obstacle for a society to prosper. With a large amount of population lives with hunger, no other thing will be more effective as like as science and technology to fight against it. Being the most important basic need, hunger creates political as well as war like issues if situation deteriorates in society. But with science providing development on farming methodology and technology making it more consumer frindly, science and technology is the solo weapon to fight against hunger till now.
Secondly, life and lifestyle of a society is constantluy changing with time. A society can not gurantee of good lifestyle without the help of tech. Basic needs except food are all part of lifestyle and they are also essential like food. Hence, to provide people good clothing,residence,health-care and etc. a society has to go to the doors of science and technology.
Thirdly, poor countries which are called '3rd world country' with respect, has to emphasize on science and technology to make themselves protected from extinction. Weather it is war or life, one can not deny that everything starts and ends with technology beating up other things at light speed.Moreover, at every prospect of life and society, science and technology upholds it's position.
Many may argue that science and technology promotes war and climate issues which are also crucial for the existence of mankind but science and technology has nothing to do with them. It is mankind that has the driving seat of either a car or a tank depending of mankind's choice. Hence I completely agree with that science and technology can solve all of the society problems and if it can't it will reduce them for sure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d by society for a development purpose. The use may solve all of society problems d...
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Suggestion: , residence
.... Hence, to provide people good clothing,residence,health-care and etc. a society has to g...
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ple good clothing,residence,health-care and etc. a society has to go to the doors of sci...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... beating up other things at light speed.Moreover, at every prospect of life and society,...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...e and technology upholds its position. Many may argue that science and technology promo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...or a tank depending of mankinds choice. Hence I completely agree with that science an...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...h that science and technology can solve all of the society problems and if it cant it will...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e all of the society problems and if it cant it will reduce them for sure.
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...e all of the society problems and if it cant it will reduce them for sure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91346153846 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9160308549 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504807692308 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4725992316 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21200429369 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641735326523 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442782096172 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116879732197 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335036921383 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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